Penname: GryffinGal [Contact]
Real name: Beccah
Member Since: 06/23/2005
Membership status: Member

I am a teen who is interested in journalism as a career, which is partially the reason I write fan fiction, the other part being that I am a huge Harry Potter fan. :)

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Reviews by GryffinGal
Harry Potter staggers out of the Forbidden Forest after defeating Voldemort. He had to kill the evil wizard three times, but he is finally dead. The wizarding and Muggle worlds are now safe.

Our hero cares nothing for this. He carries in his arms the body of Luna Lovegood, motionless but still alive - placed in this wide-eyed coma by hours of the Cruciatus Curse torture.

How can Harry rescue the love of his life from a state much worse than Frank and Alice Longbottom's?

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Dark Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 20329; Read Count: 3292; Completed: No

Updated: 08/09/2005; Published: 07/11/2005
Reviewer: GryffinGal (Signed)
09/12/2005
*gasps* ooooo What a great start!!!!! I love the Harry holding Luna thing - It's so romantic!


Chapter 1: Chapter One: He Can't Do That
Late one night Harry gets a 'visitor.' Will this visitor be able to make him understand and move on?

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1717; Read Count: 542; Completed: Yes

Updated: 08/08/2005; Published: 08/08/2005
Reviewer: GryffinGal (Signed)
11/28/2005
Wow. The letter made me want to cry. This was awesome. I especially liked the butterflys at the end. Wonderful!


Chapter 1: Butterfly Tears

It is with a heavy and burdened heart that Harry Potter begins his seventh year in the wizarding world. He begins it knowing that only he can end the Dark War, and free the world from the Dark Lord's oppression. Matt Tristan is a treasure hunter, and he's seeking a treasure that can't possibly exist. One of the last true outlaws, Matt believes it does. Fate sent both Harry and Matt down different paths, paths that will soon meet - will have to meet - if the world is to survive the coming storm... and escape the abyss that draws ever closer....



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Mild Language, Mild Violence, Strong Violence
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 22826; Read Count: 2803; Completed: No

Updated: 09/29/2005; Published: 08/27/2005
Reviewer: GryffinGal (Signed)
09/28/2005
That was excellent - not to fast paced, not to slow. It was perfect. I also like how the switches between Harry and Matt are done - Very nice. Awesome job!!


Chapter 3: Pixies and Pizza
Sometimes apple cider and a tattered blanket is all you need to realize there is hope afterall.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1460; Read Count: 397; Completed: Yes

Updated: 08/29/2005; Published: 08/29/2005
Reviewer: GryffinGal (Signed)
11/28/2005
This was amazing!! You had a lot of great comparisons in here. I loved the idea of the blanket, and the reason Harry likes it so much. Great!!!


Chapter 1: Apple Cider
Plastic Dementors by Jess [Mid Teens]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
In some cultures, it is said that each time a picture is taken of someone, a bit of their soul is removed. After being in the limelight for so long, Harry Potter is apt to agree.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Character Study, Dark Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death, Dark Fiction
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1157; Read Count: 789; Completed: Yes

Updated: 09/01/2005; Published: 09/01/2005
Reviewer: GryffinGal (Signed)
09/28/2005
Wow. That was a very haunting story. I'm not really a fan of a suicidal Harry, but you did a great job with it. I especially liked the Click, Flash bit. It was an excellent story.


Chapter 1: Plastic Dementors
Make A Wish by Oomahey [Young Teens]
starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 16]
This fic is Harry's POV of the Birthday Challenge fic, For A Wish, submitted by YelloWitchGrl, with a little bit of Ron's POV. Read that first!

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 5734; Read Count: 559; Completed: Yes

Updated: 09/01/2005; Published: 09/01/2005
Reviewer: GryffinGal (Signed)
10/05/2005
Awww that was so sweet! I especially liked when Ginny said 'no' and Harry thought she meant 'no, I won't marry you.' You put his reaction together quite nicely, and it is very well written!!! Great job!!!!


Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Make A Wish
From the world of the Hardest Decision. A series of one shot missing moments.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Alternate Universe
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 5178; Read Count: 1264; Completed: No

Updated: 12/14/2005; Published: 09/05/2005
Reviewer: GryffinGal (Signed)
11/28/2005
You have a knack for writing Ginny in a totally believable way. It was straight to the point, and very descriptive! Excellent!


Chapter 1: Kept Woman
Ginny’s POV, the missing moments from HBP. Ginny starts to notice the little things that Harry has been doing around her lately. The more she thinks about it, she can only come to one conclusion. But why would he possibly fancy her now after all this time? And why did he have to wait until she was already seeing someone?

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 3222; Read Count: 614; Completed: Yes

Updated: 09/07/2005; Published: 09/07/2005
Reviewer: GryffinGal (Signed)
10/12/2005
This was excellent - one of the best missing moment fics I've read in a while! Great job. It was well thought out and very descriptive. :)


Chapter 1: It's the Little Things
My...Hero by Ashlyn Alexander [Mid Teens]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
We started this tradition her first year out of Hogwarts. Twice a year, we came, by ourselves, to the ocean. I would rent a little cottage that over looked the crystal water and we would retreat from the world we lived in for two weeks.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2602; Read Count: 476; Completed: Yes

Updated: 09/17/2005; Published: 09/17/2005
Reviewer: GryffinGal (Signed)
11/28/2005
You should have warned us!! First it was so happy, then all of a sudden it got sad!! Incredible job, as usual!


Chapter 1: My...Hero
Moment of Clarity by Melindaleo [Young Teens]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]

A HBP Missing Moment. Ron told Harry that Ginny had visited the hospital wing while he'd been unconscious. We know what Harry's overactive subconscious imagined happened during that visit...but what was Ginny thinking?



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama, Fluff
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 4942; Read Count: 730; Completed: Yes

Updated: 09/19/2005; Published: 09/19/2005
Reviewer: GryffinGal (Signed)
09/28/2005
As usual, that was amazing! I loved how Ginny was speculating on Dean, and how she felt bad after seeing Harry's look when she and Dean were caught kissing. I could imagine that being in the real book. Great job!!!!


Chapter 1: Moment of Clarity