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Real name: Deborah
Member Since: 03/26/2006
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Shadow of the Serpent by KEDme [Young Teens]
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The sequel to Home Alone. Harry is whisked away to an ancient island to be trained in Occlumency. What he finds is another complication to add to his already complicated life. Will friendship, love, loyalty, bravery, and honor be enough to save him from the Shadow of the Serpent that haunts his life? H/G, with some R/H in later chapters.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 220899; Read Count: 38806; Completed: Yes

Updated: 03/08/2007; Published: 01/22/2006
Reviewer: DeborahSu (Signed)
09/07/2006
I would swear I already read this chapter ... but the previous one was different, before ... good story, great chapter ... but I'm ready to find out how Harry wake up Ginny!

Author's Response: Sorry... you probably did.  This chapter was posted under the title of chapter 26 by mistake, so I replaced 26 with the real 26 once my mistake was pointed out to me.  Again, sorry for the confusion.  If you haven't read the real 26, please go back and check it out.



Chapter 28: The Serpent Strikes
Yes, but... by Aestel [Mid Teens]
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An irreverent, but in-character parody of the MLC where Snape and Tonks show the Wizarding World what they think about arranged marriages.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Humor
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 36794; Read Count: 9743; Completed: No

Updated: 01/10/2008; Published: 01/29/2006
Reviewer: DeborahSu (Signed)
06/04/2006
So far so good--I don't think I can think of a more unlikely pairing, but they are becoming cute together! LOL  Please update soon?  Please?

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!  I'm glad you like the story.  As for that updating bit can I get away with an "I'm working on it"?  I really am... I'm just slooooow.



Chapter 9: Nine
Reviewer: DeborahSu (Signed)
09/10/2006
Hurray!!!!  An update!!!!  This is an amusing little tale ... I can hardly wait for the wedding! LOL!!!

Author's Response: *Laughs*  Thanks!  Personally, I'm dreading writing the wedding because I'm afraid of not meeting people's expectations, so cross your fingers that I can think of lots of nefarious things to add by then!



Chapter 10: Ten
Childhood's End by Spiderwort [Young Teens]
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A Scottish witchling comes of age between two Muggle wars, her father a proud Highland laird, her mother a Muggle-born witch troubled by a dark past. First year Minerva McGonagall looks forward to school with no greater ambition than to make her House Quidditch team and come home for the Christmas holidays to a mother freed of her deep depression. But Minerva's first year will be marred by frustration and grief, as she struggles to help her family and find her place in the wizarding world. She will enjoy the support of friends, but her greatest ally will be the author of a book she found in a dustbin.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction, Pre-Canon
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Mystery
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents Series: Before the Beginning
Word count: 112320; Read Count: 31450; Completed: Yes

Updated: 09/13/2006; Published: 02/04/2006
Reviewer: DeborahSu (Signed)
09/05/2006
Oh, No!!!!  You stopped right before the duel!!!  But you knew that ... I do hope you'll post again soon!




Chapter 28: 28. Final Reckoning
Reviewer: DeborahSu (Signed)
09/07/2006
Great chapter!  This tale is really starting to spin ... I look forward to more.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Deborah Su, I almost removed this story from the website, since no one was responding (My staunchest fan, Madaline is now reading it on SQ).  But your review makes it all worth it.

 Yay for reviewers!  They are a would-be writer's life's-blood.




Chapter 29: 29. The Duel
A Beautiful Mess by WiCkEd [Young Teens]
starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]

Submitted to 2006 HPFF Anniversary 'Orderly Romance' Challenge. Love; a word that can mean life or death in a war. For Marlene McKinnon and Gideon Prewett, it meant death.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction, Pre-Canon
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2653; Read Count: 406; Completed: Yes

Updated: 03/06/2006; Published: 03/06/2006
Reviewer: DeborahSu (Signed)
08/27/2006
Well done!  You're only 14?  You're going to be a real live, paid author someday, young lady!


Author's Response: Yupp, only 14 lol. Thanks so much! That really means a lot to me!



Chapter 1: Something New

A young girl with a tendency to mouth off, and pocket things that don't belong to her, along with a Knockturn Alley shop owner get drawn, together, into a situation that can only be handled by the strongest hearts.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 3521; Read Count: 339; Completed: Yes

Updated: 04/07/2006; Published: 04/07/2006
Reviewer: DeborahSu (Signed)
08/20/2006
Beautifully told ... in a short little one-shot, you got me to care about both of them and to almost feel like I knew them.  My heart ached along with Arx as he knew what he had to do, in order to spare Harmony/Rafe ... and what he must have suffered after that!




Chapter 1: Nice Knowing You

A branch-off of To Kill a Thief, to get a good sense of who Rafe and Arx are, you need to read it. What might have happened if Bellatrix had never came that fateful day? If Voldemort had never taken an interest in Arx? Would they still have perished bravely? Only time can tell...



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1576; Read Count: 314; Completed: No

Updated: 04/14/2006; Published: 04/14/2006
Reviewer: DeborahSu (Signed)
08/20/2006
I do like the way you're going with this.  Rather than "ruining" the characters, we're having the chance to see what might have happened in a different universe.  Cool! :-)




Chapter 1: Some Things You Just Don't Talk About

After the horrifying events of Harry Potter and the Loss of Innocence, Harry finds himself back at the Dursleys. This time, however, demons from his imprisonment at Malfoy Manor haunt him sleeping and waking. How will he ever rise from the ashes, for Harry must rise if he wishes to fulfill the Prophecy. He must rise if he wishes to live, for sometimes Death is more appealing than Life....



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Language, Strong Violence
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 388609; Read Count: 77152; Completed: No

Updated: 01/21/2008; Published: 04/14/2006
Reviewer: DeborahSu (Signed)
12/10/2006
Yeah?  So?  What happens next?  Talk about a cliffie!  Brat! ;-)


Chapter 32: Temper, Temper

After spending half his life trying to rid the world of Voldemort, Harry Potter finally succeeds. However, the price has been high - too high. With nothing left to live for, Harry risks his life to go back in time and ‘do things right’,


However, as Harry attempts to carry out his plan, something goes wrong...



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU)
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 28026; Read Count: 8245; Completed: No

Updated: 09/18/2006; Published: 04/15/2006
Reviewer: DeborahSu (Signed)
09/16/2006
I'll try to be patient, awaiting updates as you have internet access ... but it'll be hard!!!  A good start to what promises to be an interesting story with a totally different take on many things!


Chapter 7: CHAPTER SIX: The House of the Serpent