Real name: Jayadev Calamur
Member Since: 03/15/2006
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I love the beginning! The letter was excellent. Sounds like something Sirius would have done irrespective of what HBP had to say!
His feelings for Ginny are very well developed here. Consider the fact that he's a 15-year-old teenager, he'll think too much and that worked for me.
An interesting start. Though the only constructive criticism I would give is that it's too long for a prologue adn you left a cliffy at the end.
I love your build of environment and how you have portrayed Ginny and Harry. Great work!