Penname: Black_Esmarelda [Contact]
Real name: Ria
Member Since: 06/22/2005
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After All by Emmeline Vance [Young Teens]
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The Muggle picnic planned for the Hogwarts students is anticipated by all--except for Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley. They both have the same problem, and when one event leads to another...how will such a simple thing turn their whole day around?

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fluff, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 3242; Read Count: 477; Completed: Yes

Updated: 06/23/2005; Published: 06/23/2005
Reviewer: Black_Esmarelda (Signed)
06/25/2005
I couldn't decide between an eight, or a nine, so i just rounded up, lolz. Good story, I like how you made it simply realistic. You didn't make it that the swimsuits were great looking, and that Harry and ginny were jsut too self-concious to wear them, I really liked that :) I like Ginny's attitude- i think it portrayes what JKRowling had in mind, somewhat. Hope to see more of your work!


Chapter 1: One-Shot
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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: None
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No

Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: Black_Esmarelda (Signed)
06/25/2005
Fantastic, Fabulous, Awsome, Inspiring, Superb...What I meant to say was that it's simply great. It's so...romantic, but not in the love-sense, but in a way that twines angst, love, war, and friendship together. Hoping to read more of your works

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks! I did "1999" for fun - the song just wouldn't get out of my head. :) I would love to hear what you think about my pet project - "The Greatest Power" - a sixth-year fic that is about halfway done.



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Centrifugal Force by Melindaleo [Young Teens]
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A simple oneshot where Ron, Ginny, and Harry visit Hermione in order to attend a Muggle carnival in her town. How will the foursome react to suddenly being allowed to simply be teens? Originally written for a SIYE summer challenge.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 4471; Read Count: 710; Completed: Yes

Updated: 06/25/2005; Published: 06/25/2005
Reviewer: Black_Esmarelda (Signed)
06/25/2005
Hiya I absolutly luvd ur story! It was awsome. What a way to bring the Wizardng and Muggle worlds together...I'm writing a fic to do just that, and I hope mine is at least half as good as yours. Looking foreward to reading orre of your work...

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Of all the stories I've attempted, I think this one is my favorite.



Chapter 1: Centrifugal Force