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Hallowquest: Harry Potter and the Arthurian Era by Ealdwulf [Mid Teens]
Harry is hit by a spell during a fight at The Burrow and vanishes from the known Wizarding world. Waking up in a world and time not his own, he comes face to face with the greatest wizard ever known.
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents Series: The Hallowquest Saga
Word count: 24018; Read Count: 12520; Completed: No
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents Series: The Hallowquest Saga
Word count: 24018; Read Count: 12520; Completed: No
Updated: 06/13/2007; Published: 05/04/2005
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
04/04/2006
Very exciting chapter. I loved it from start to finish. excellent stuff wulfy.
Chapter 4: Chapter 03
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
04/04/2006
Wow wulfy.. fantastic chapter... I am amazed by some of your ideas and the Hermione deduction scene was perfectly executed.
Chapter 5: Chapter 04
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
04/04/2006
ROFL
This was one hilarious chapter. I totally loved it from start to end. Looks like Merlin is being very entertained by Harry and Gin-Gin.
Chapter 6: Chapter 05
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
04/04/2006
erm... this was a very informative chapter. Half of this stuff I had never known about Merlin.. seems like you did a lot of research.
Great job.
Author's Response: The Arthurian Era and Mythos have always been something that I have been interested in. Depending on what versions you read can relate a lot of interesting information.
Chapter 7: Chapter 06
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
04/04/2006
I loved it so far... very, very impressive. I really cant wait to read more.
Chapter 8: Chapter 07
Ancient Magic by kjpzak [Young Teens]
Harry and Ginny are destined to have a love that endures. He Who Must Not be Named certainly thinks so. Could their love be the key to fulfilling one of his greatest wishes?
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Mild Violence
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 38111; Read Count: 12696; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/04/2005; Published: 05/04/2005
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
05/10/2005
Great start to the fic. Lucius Malfoy and Borgin were totally in chracter.
You have made me very curious as to what happenes next.
Ham
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 1: Prologue
Hateful Love by Perenelle [Young Teens]
Hermione hates Ron and is ranting to Harry abou how much she hates him. look at the tital it explain all you need to know from here. I was reading Romeo and Juliet when I wrote it and I was also really mad at someone.
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 594; Read Count: 425; Completed: No
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 594; Read Count: 425; Completed: No
Updated: 05/05/2005; Published: 05/05/2005
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
05/09/2005
That was pretty decent...
But you need to get it betaed. The spelling and Grammar mistakes are pretty bad.
For instance the word is Conceited not conceded.
Its a really nice idea for a short fic but you may want to expand it a bit. For instance why does Hermione rant about Ron to Harry in the first place?
Secondly why is she thinking about this converastion when Harry is dying of all times. Wouldn't she think of Harry instead and what he means to her?
Chapter 1: one and only chapter
After Five Years by Perenelle [Young Teens]
Harry, Hermione, and Ron are all in their sixth year at Hogwarts. Sirius is dead, Death Eater attacks, and romances form. Harry/Hermione, Ron/?; I'll try to keep the fluff under control but I can't make any promises. Please Read & Review!
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Slash
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 7642; Read Count: 1613; Completed: No
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Slash
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 7642; Read Count: 1613; Completed: No
Updated: 05/08/2005; Published: 05/08/2005
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
05/09/2005
Err... Your plot is not bad and you have the potential to wrtite a good fic. Unfortunately your Spelling, grammar, and mistakes in the tenses makes it a very trying read.
The spelling for Harry's Godfather is Sirius not Serious. And it is Prophecy not Prophacy.
You really need to get yourself a good beta reader so that your writing improves.
It would be a crime to let your fic go to waste just because of the spelling and grammatical mistakes.
Chapter 1: Leaving the Dursleys
Wake Up Call by AndyB [Young Teens]
A cookie jar one-shot from a while back... the challenge was that it had to be Bill/Hermione, and involve a Weasley jumper, a pyramid, mistletoe and several other things.
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 489; Read Count: 382; Completed: No
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 489; Read Count: 382; Completed: No
Updated: 05/11/2005; Published: 05/11/2005
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
05/11/2005
Very...ummm... Interesting couples.
Harry/Angelina, Fleur/Charlie, George/Lee, Ginny/Neville...
It took a while to get my head around all of that but once i did i like the style of the writing. I wished it was longer as it is too short to make any kind of lasting impression.
Chapter 1: Christmas morning, and Hermione's asleep...
Different by YelloWitchGrl [Mid Teens]
One Shot! Ginny becomes disgusted with beauty and how many girls react to it. Her reactions and interactions with Harry. That does not even sum it up... sigh. POST OOTP
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Fluff, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2966; Read Count: 519; Completed: Yes
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Fluff, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2966; Read Count: 519; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/11/2005; Published: 05/11/2005
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
05/12/2005
Hmm... that was very well done and very different.
Nice bit of fluff.
Ham
Author's Response: Thank you... I do try to be different...
Author's Response: Thank you... I do try to be different...
Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Different