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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
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Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No

Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
05/31/2005
I finally got to reading your fic Sally. I like what i read so far. Very different and unique. The first chapter was a bit abrupt though. I would have liked a little more detail about the romance and how they fell in love. You see if Harry is to die and you want people to sympathize with him then you need to show what kind of a person he is. What people will miss now that he is gone. Because of the abruptness of your chapter that feeling does not come about as well as it might have. This is where those little details matter so much. Off to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Imagine my delightful surprise to find all of these reviews from you this morning! I am sorry about the abruptness, but glad that you continued with it. I would usually agree with you, and I might go back and reedit it after I am done (and get a moment away from wizardtale, lol). At the time I did not feel the need to go into great detail because it is kind of a spoof on Harry Potter and the Princess Bride. But you have a very valid point. Thank you for the review.



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Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
05/31/2005
Loved the Rhymes and Snape was really fun. I like where you are going with this.

Author's Response: Thanks :D



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Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
05/31/2005
Lol I love Snape's speech patterns. 'Inconceivable!' Lol Hagrid and Neville are both excellent in their roles. The fic is turning out to be quite fun so far. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thank you, Ham!!! I always like to read and get feedback from you.



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Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
05/31/2005
The whole fic so far has the fantasy feel. An Alice in Wonderland kind of feel. Anything can happen and will happen Its a very fun read.

Author's Response: Thanks; and thank you for all of the reviews. They have really made my day!



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Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
05/31/2005
Dramatic. All I can say is it is very Dramatic. Tell me... Us Draco really in love with Ginny? Or is it just a beautiful possession thing?

Author's Response: Dramatic? Thanks, I'll take that as a compliment ;-) I don’t think the ferret could love anyone but himself. So to answer your question Ginny is a ‘trophy’ to him.



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Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
05/31/2005
Haha Very well done. Draco acting just like a Slytherin he is. Ginny is playing the role of the Proncess to the hilt. Very good. Will the Knight save his princess from the Evil Bouncing White Ferret? Find out in the next chapter...

Author's Response: :-D Yes, Ginny will be saved from the Councing Ferret. Ham, you are too funny. Love your reviews.



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This is the story of a war. A war between good and evil, light and dark. This is the war Harry will fight, fight until the last breath leaves his body. This is where he will learn the meanings of life and death, love and friendship, sorrow and betrayal, honour and hardship. This is the war where he will fulfil his destiny.
H/G with some R/H sixth year fic.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: Mild Violence
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 158162; Read Count: 23816; Completed: No

Updated: 03/13/2011; Published: 02/18/2005
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
03/12/2005
Hey there. Great first chapter. I like the portrayal of Vernon and Petunia. They are spot on. But will they really be so nasty to Harry after the chat the Order gave them? The letter and will was well done. You found a belivable way of bypassing all the will reading (Wish i had thought of that) The letter from James and Lily was nice too. (Though the way it was written it seemed like a Gred and Forge Letter) Anyway great beginning Ham


Chapter 1: Home isn't always where the heart lies.
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
03/14/2005
Ok that was another nice chapter. But again Ron and Hermione are a bit out of character. And would Mrs. Weasley really have let Ron get away with saying so much to Ginny? Would her brothers? Anyway the characterizations were a bit off but the writing was very good.


Chapter 2: The helper and her charge.
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
03/14/2005
Ok this was your best chapter so far. A really fantastic one. The fight scene and Voldemort in Ginny's dream was brilliantly written. Need more chapters


Chapter 3: Because every fortress can be breached.
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
06/14/2005
Loved the latest chapter Cat.. Update again soon. I like where you are going with Harry and Ginny and feel that theres going to be a delightful confrontation betwen Harry and Dumbledore soon. It will be fun!

Author's Response: Some nice fluffy fluff soon, I promise Ham! Thanks for the review! Cathy



Chapter 10: Back to Grimmauld Place