Penname: Dementor149 [Contact]
Real name: John Kuhnell
Member Since: 01/20/2006
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Stolen Kisses by LunaChaos [Young Teens]
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Hermione is dating Ron, and Harry is dating Ginny...but things aren't going too well. So what happens when Harry and Hermione meet in the kitchen when no one's around? [OneShot] [HarryxHermione]


Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1958; Read Count: 701; Completed: Yes

Updated: 04/15/2006; Published: 04/15/2006
Reviewer: Dementor149 (Signed)
04/15/2006
I thought your story was very sweet. I liked that Harry was too much of a gentleman to try to interfere with Ron and Hermione's relationship. The only one that seemed out of character was Ginny, she had never seemed to be the needy type to me. Ron's table manners are bad but that part of your story was really disgusting. Could you explain what you ment about the way Percy was looking at Harry? Your use of the word "uncanny" puzzled me. I liked your story very much - could you do a sequel? I'd like to see your interpretation of how Ron and Ginny take Harry and Hermione getting together. Thank you for a fun read.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I\'m glad that you enjoyed it.

The Ginny thing was just me, I don\'t really like her, and I needed a way for Harry to be annoyed with her.

The look Percy was sending Harry was just an unusual look like, he wasn\'t comfortable being around him, or he had some hidden thoughts about him.

Hmm, I might consider a sequel, actually! 

And, again, thank you for reading and reviewing! 




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