Penname: AmericanStreetWitch [Contact]
Real name: Ashley Lyn
Member Since: 01/15/2006
Membership status: Member

My name is Ashley. I love to write fanfics. At the current moment, I am rewriting A New Darkness, and it has been retitled A Shattered Peace. When I am finished with the revision I will start revising my other stories.

I am now 23 years old. I work at ACS where I take  credit card applications, and while I am not writing fanfics, working, or sleeping, I am trying to struggle through my writers block and write my own fantasy series: The Vampire Wars.

 



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The Road To Freedom by Calamur [Young Teens]
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A story that follows HBP. Join Harry and his friends as they trail the remaining Horcruxes, face obstacles and save the Wizarding World from being taken over by Riddle. 

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, General
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Violence
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 38708; Read Count: 8991; Completed: No

Updated: 06/26/2006; Published: 03/15/2006
Reviewer: AmericanStreetWitch (Signed)
04/09/2006

Really great chapter. Vernon and Petunia seem really OOC to me, but then everyone has their own view of how people are. I'm sure they would probably come around in the end, but at the last minute. You have a good style, pace and technique. Great dialogue as well.



Author's Response: thanks for your nice review Ashley. I shall check your story out soon and give it my fullest attention



Chapter 2: Forgiveness and Reunions
Okay, this is our story of Remus and Tonks and what would have happened if she had gotten bit by him during the final battle.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Mild Language, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations, Strong Language, Strong Violence
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 83760; Read Count: 16633; Completed: No

Updated: 06/26/2006; Published: 04/10/2006
Reviewer: AmericanStreetWitch (Signed)
04/24/2006

Awww.... slightly sad ending there. No tears though. :) i like the beginning. Very well written. I liked the beginning.

I'm sorry for what happened to Tonks. I truly believe though that for Remus to have any type of "normal" relationship, it would have to be with a werewolf, someone that would understand him.

Good writing. :)




Chapter 1: Prologue The Aftermath
Reviewer: AmericanStreetWitch (Signed)
04/24/2006

I got a question.

What about Tonk's Metamorphmagus thing? Can she still shapeshift even thought she's now a werewolf.

Good dialogue. I think i like the Remus/Tonks ship.




Chapter 2: Adjustments
Ginny is stuck in her house, away from everyone with her nephew, forced to survive and get by. She is forced to answer the question of what she would do differently... if she could go back.


Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: Summer Angst (CLOSED)
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 3952; Read Count: 573; Completed: Yes

Updated: 04/19/2006; Published: 04/19/2006
Reviewer: AmericanStreetWitch (Signed)
04/22/2006
okay can't really write a great, terrific review because no other words can come to me. of course, i'm trying to type while wiping away tears. this was a fantastic one shot and i think you captured Ginny perfectly. I only wish I could write half as well.

Author's Response: Thank you and I have a lot of practice!  I write Ginny all the time and I\'m constantly playing around with her in my head, plus I have great people telling me "try this".  I am so glad you enjoyed it so much and thank you for letting me know!  This is a fantastic review! :-)



Chapter 1: Chapter 1