Penname: Strider [Contact]
Real name: Strider
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Edward pays Bella's workplace a visit. Fluff ensues.

Edward/Bella, post-New Moon fluff.



Categories: Twilight; Characters: Bella Swan, Edward Cullen; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Humor, Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1685; Read Count: 506; Completed: Yes

Updated: 05/13/2009; Published: 05/12/2009
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Reviewer: Strider (Signed)
05/21/2009

This is really sweet and fun, with a little undercurrent of wistfulness.  I like to see Edward being playful, and poor Bella being so insecure she doens't know whether he's making fun or not.  Very good characterization!  Nice work.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm always unsure when it comes to writing from Bella's perspective, so I'm glad to hear you thought they were in character. x



Chapter 1: Newton's Outfitters