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Edward pays Bella's workplace a visit. Fluff ensues.
Edward/Bella, post-New Moon fluff.
This is really sweet and fun, with a little undercurrent of wistfulness. I like to see Edward being playful, and poor Bella being so insecure she doens't know whether he's making fun or not. Very good characterization! Nice work.
Thank you! I'm always unsure when it comes to writing from Bella's perspective, so I'm glad to hear you thought they were in character. x