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Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No

I love the 'perhap's and the fact that he realised he was going to go crazy with possibilities. It is SO like Ginny to put herself before others as well. And it's great that Harry realised there was no substitute. The fact that Harry mentioned her as a friend was brilliant. Too many people don't understand that you are still friends with a person you love, particularly if you started out as friends. Excellent ending. I can see why this is your favourite.

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Snow stops the background noise.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Mystery
Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 411; Read Count: 376; Completed: Yes

I thought it was excellent and I'll let my mind wander as to who or what it was about. The details were absolutely amazing. Keep it up!

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This story will take you back to 15th century Venice where Nicolas and Perenelle Flamel visit an artist friend. There they will deeply explore the story of the Wizarding world’s 1st healer.

Discover the myth and legend of Asclepius – the Greek god of healing. Discover the roots of dark creatures like the Inferi and their evolved form. Discover the beginnings of that deep hatred and set traditions of the Wizarding world’s most ancient family.

WINNER OF THE MNFF HISTORY-MYTHOLOGY CHALLENGE!

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction, Pre-Canon
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama, General, Mystery
Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents Series: Dark Histories
Word count: 22477; Read Count: 3449; Completed: Yes

You're doing very well, I'm glad to say. As your beta, I can tell more than any of your readers that you are improving. Unfortunately, historical stories don't seem to be very popular. I'm nearly done the next chapter. Hopefully your readers with increase!

Author's Response: Thanks Nicole. I just got it. Will post it ASAP.

*Squeals* I also just got word. This story is the winner for challenge it was written for :)

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I really liked this chapter. It flowed continuously with the last one. Even though there were Merlin knows how many years in between it didn't feel like it at all. I think this is the best chapter so far. It really pulled me in. I hardly made any corrections on it comparitively. I think you're doing very well and that you deserved to win that contest. Congratulations!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your help. I does help to improve the flow. You corrected the last one really fast and your suggestion does help with the transistion. :)

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You met Allesandra Quartermaine in A New Darkness. She was introduced as Harry Potter's mother in law. But in this story, Harry Potter is not in it. This is about Allesandra's life. How she came to be the most feared, the most darkest witch of all times. Read her adventures, her triumphs, her loss and sorrows. Learn about her quest for immortality and how she came across the Amulet of Corrisa. Learn about the reign of fear and terror that surpasses everyone. Open the pages and truly see Allesandra Quartermaine.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Dark Fiction, General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, General
Warnings: Character Death, Dark Fiction, Mild Language, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations, Strong Language, Strong Violence
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 23433; Read Count: 560; Completed: No

Patience, as a beta, is something I have plenty of. I like this story a lot and I am anxious to see where you head with it. I've hardly ever seen an author so willing to accept criticism or one who learned so quickly. Congratulations on getting puclished here. I'm sure, when you're ready, you will be a fully-fledged author out in the real world. Just keep on pushing like you have been. Good luck, and great job. Nicole

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Thanks for the mention, Ashley. You're doing greatly and I can see you getting better every day. It's a shame there aren't more people readying this story, but be sure I'll be plugging it!

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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
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Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No

Good job on the voluntary posting. I hope that goes well for you. I think you conveyed the feelings well, but I also think Ginny is a bit OoC. She isn't one to sulk and hide from others, even if she thinks they don't like her. On the other hand, you've got some great descriptiong there, but there is always room for more.

Author's Response: This was written to be set in Harry\'s Second or Third year... not to mention being very AU.

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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
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Nice, Sharon. I love how you worded things, particularly in the first half. Toward the end it was a little unclear that a letter had started. I mean, I got it, but it took a second. Also, 'placed them his protection under' seems a bit strange. I know it's a hard thing to do, but it's just a comment. Good job!

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One heady night and a careless mistake was all it took to destroy paradise and forever lose the woman he loved. Now, on what was to be his wedding day, he reflects back to that fateful night that cost him everything he ever wanted. SONGFIC

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Songfic
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Alcohol and/or Drug Abuse, Strong Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2199; Read Count: 174; Completed: Yes

It was pretty good; well written to be sure.  I do think it was unlikely for Hermione to just ask if he wanted to get married without having a conversation first.  Ron, yes.  Definitely. 

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