Excellent! I like the angle this fic is playing at; this is a relationship that is very unexplored.
One line that stuck out at me was : ..."You keep on giving to him, and one of these days you’ll have nothing left to give.”
“At least they’re both happy. True friendship is giving to one another totally until you have nothing left to give.”
“You are a fool then.”
It was very strong in showing the difference between the Slytherin and Gryffindor mentalities. The sections of poem were also great. Amazing job! *10*
Author's Response: ^_^ Glad to hear that I was able to shoe that brotherly relationship, despite the fact that it was clear that they have different views of the world.
Thanks for the review and the 10 rating ^_^
Chapter 1: Little King … Thy Kingdom Torn Asunder …