Penname: PatDaniels [Contact]
Real name: Patrick
Member Since: 01/04/2006
Membership status: Member

My Personal Info

Name: Patrick
Age: 14
Country: USA
Interests: Reading, writing, drawing, talking on AIM, making websites, cooking, gaming, Internet.
Favorite Books: Harry Potter series, Inheritance Trilogy, Artemis Fowl books, Chronicles of Narnia, Pendragon Series, The Lost Years of Merlin series, Midnighters Trilogy
Favorite Authors: J.K. Rowling, D.J. MacHale, T.A. Barron, Eoin Colfer, Christopher Paolini, Jonathan Stroud, C.S. Lewis, Scott Westerfeld

Harry Potter Info

Favorite Books: Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire; Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince
Favorite Movie: Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire
Least Favorite Book: Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban
Least Favorite Movie: Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone
Favorite Genre: Romance
Favorite Characters: Trio, Ginny, Fred, George
Favorite Non-Slash/Femmeslash Ships:
-Harry/Ginny
-Ron/Hermione
-Hermione/Harry
Favorite Slash/Femmeslash Ships:
-Hermione/Ginny
-Fleur/Hermione or Ginny
-Harry/Ron
Disliked Non-Slash/Femmeslash Ships:
-Harry/Romilda
-Ron/Lavender
-Harry/Luna
Disliked Slash/Femmeslash Ships
-Harry/Draco

"A good story makes the reader forget that it's fiction, and makes him think it's real." ~Me (Okay, okay, bad quote, but I wanted to have a quote, and I had 10 seconds to make one. :P)



Beta-reader: Yes
Gender: male


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Changes by henriette [Adult]
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Harry goes through some changes over the summer to his last year. Voldemort is gone. His best friends aren’t going to go their last year at Hogwarts, Hermoine is in Germany and Ron in France. Harry is home alone the whole summer and gets a job at a gym. On his 17’th birthday he gets his elf heredity, but something else happens too, he gets bitten by a vampire. And with this new develop and company he changes a lot. The world meets a new and more handsome Harry, who likes to tease Draco Malfoy. Harry is a bit evil, but in a good way, and his favourite movie is Cruel intentions, I’m too sexy and for fun.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Mild Language, Sexual Situations, Slash
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 24807; Read Count: 637; Completed: No

Updated: 03/17/2006; Published: 01/27/2006
Reviewer: BonnieLvr87 (Signed)
01/29/2006
Hello! Glad to see you used my betaed copy. :P I really like this story. I'm not a huge fan of H/D, but I'm sure it'll be good. -BonnieLvr-

Author's Response: Thanks, but I won't be only H/D, it's kind of a multiship fic at first....male anf female for my Harry....



Chapter 1: 1: Good luck living!
Vampyr by Zetera [Adult]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]

A complex tale showing excerpts from the lives of Severus Snape in his role as a double agent, and Tom Riddle as he became Lord Voldemort. Both of their journeys are linked through the Vampyr. Set during the first war.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Dark Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Strong Language, Strong Violence
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 14737; Read Count: 314; Completed: Yes

Updated: 04/03/2006; Published: 03/25/2006
Reviewer: BonnieLvr87 (Signed)
03/26/2006

Page 1
Your imagery is superb. Sheets of rain. Icy wind. Rippling robes. It is all, indeed, excellent.

Very nice work.

Page 2
Very nice, again. That Avril Vampyr is one menacing creature.



Author's Response: Thank you so much, I feel the story improves as it progresses, so hopefully you\'ll continue to enjoy it. By page one, page two, do you mean chapter one, chapter two? I didn\'t think it had been validated yet.



Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Return
Hot Gimmick by MeiQueen [Adult]
Ginny makes a deal with Draco when he stumbles upon her doing something she shouldn't.


Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Sexual Situations, Strong Language
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 6526; Read Count: 574; Completed: No

Updated: 06/21/2006; Published: 04/13/2006
Reviewer: BonnieLvr87 (Signed)
04/14/2006

Very nice story.

You have established a good plot. I love the Ginny-is-a-slave-to-Draco thing. But, I think you've made Draco too nice, or maybe that's just because he has a slave.

In this paragraph, "Ginny was so lost in her thoughts that she actually missed the entrance to the library and had to backtrack. Entering the dusty room, she saw that it was fairly deserted. Just as well, Ginevra thought miserably. I really don’t want anyone catching me doing what I’m about to do." you spelt "Ginerva" wrong.

And, also note that when you have quotes and then you have a comma, period, or other form of punctuation, it goes inside the quote. So, it'd be like: "'Text here!.,'" not "'Text here'!.," I know that I saw this just a few times.

I can't wait until chapter 2.
Patrick
-Added you and story to favorites.



Author's Response:

I agree with the punctuation bit, "HG" was written upon a day of extreme inspiration last year, and I just can\'t be convinced to go back and edit that last chapter...even though I know I should.  Her name actually is "Ginevra", according to JKR.  I rather like it, really.  Something different. :D Oh, and Draco will get to be successively more of a prat as time goes on.  He has his moments in this story, lol.

Thank you so much for adding me and my story to your favorites, you\'re too kind! Also, thank you for reviewing! It was great hearing from you, and I hope to hear from you when I get the next chapter out!




Chapter 1: The Deal
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 97]
Harry has learned the Prophesy and he does not believe that a schoolboy can defeat Voldemort, so he decides that if he is going to die then he is first going to live.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Mild Violence, Strong Language
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 182518; Read Count: 65357; Completed: Yes

Updated: 03/08/2007; Published: 05/08/2006
Reviewer: BonnieLvr87 (Signed)
08/08/2006

Very well-written story!

At first, with all of Harry's secrecy, I thought he a fugitive. :P

Why does he think he's going to die? Or is that in a later chapter? I'm dying to know. :P




Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Goodbye
Harry is maimed and scarred, emotionally and physically, after the Final Battle. The Chosen One faces his own demons, and finds there are no defences against himself. And I, I am am here to help.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1121; Read Count: 517; Completed: Yes

Updated: 05/22/2006; Published: 05/22/2006
Reviewer: BonnieLvr87 (Signed)
06/19/2006

Great story.

I love Ginny's loyalty in this story. Not many people would stand by their man when he's disfigured.

Good job.




Chapter 1: Sub-Chapter

Three meetings, two people, one place. The girl and the boy, together and apart. Nothing lasts forever, but at least she remembers when it felt like eternity, when the days were soft, the nights of dark and their love, forever [Lily/James AU]



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Alternate Universe
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1220; Read Count: 475; Completed: Yes

Updated: 06/04/2006; Published: 06/04/2006
Reviewer: BonnieLvr87 (Signed)
06/19/2006

That was a really sad story.

Did James really die, or is he hidden away and to be reintroduced in a later chapter?

I like how James and Lily were still alive.

Good job.




Chapter 1: Sub-Chapter

This is a story that asks that painful question we all deal with at some time or another:  what might have been.  This is a look at one possible answer, particularly where Harry and Ginny are concerned.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Alternate Universe
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 63153; Read Count: 17333; Completed: Yes

Updated: 11/12/2006; Published: 08/06/2006
Reviewer: BonnieLvr87 (Signed)
08/08/2006

Yay. Harry and Ginny will get back together? I hope so. :D

Incredible work. Good job.

Are you going to write all the way up, and even past, the 6th year, since the Prologue is in the 6th, but the story begins in the 4th? That's one long adventure for a fan fic writer. :P

Again, great job.




Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Gravity by Flickering [All Ages]
starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]

Margaret McKee often shows only one personality to the world, but step inside the self that is known only to her. The death of her mother leads to an inner, lonely solitude.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), Dark Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Dark Fiction
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 986; Read Count: 381; Completed: No

Updated: 12/02/2006; Published: 12/02/2006
Reviewer: BonnieLvr87 (Signed)
12/24/2006

I love your many similies to describethis girl's life. They add immense detail and make the story all the more interesting.

Typically, I tend to read stories with some dialogue, as I like to read that kind of thing for some reason...but the way you wrote this was incredible, even if shorter than many stories.

Also, I like how you can make the root of her misery gravity. It is a unique soure - rather than a verbal fight with a friend or something.

I do hope you continue the story soon, as I cannot wait to see if she flies. ;)

Good job,
-Patrick




Chapter 1: Gravity