Penname: hedwig_edwiges [Contact]
Real name: claudia
Member Since: 12/26/2005
Membership status: Member

I'm a Brazilian librarian that feel in love with the Harry Potter world and spent hours and hours reading fanfic, while waiting for the next book from JKR. Now I'm trying my hand in writing something.

As a permanet Author's Note:  since English is a second language for me, I'll ask for forgiveness before you anything I wrote. I use the checking on spelling and grammar from the software but while I don't have a permanent beta, I'm bound to make mistakes.

Thanks for any review and comment.



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History - Retold by Illeanah [Mid Teens]
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The cupboard seems the only escape for Harry when Death Eaters attack. Fortunately, Harry finds himself in a new world under the guidance of a wizard hated throughout time... But there is more to ol' Snake Eyes than meets the eye.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction, Pre-Canon
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General
Warnings: Mild Language, Strong Violence
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 22331; Read Count: 10507; Completed: No

Updated: 04/09/2006; Published: 01/10/2006
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
01/14/2006
i don't think harry would just gulp downh slytherin attitude. he is too much like the dursleys. that didn't sound so natural after all.

Author's Response: Well... each to their own, This was my first attempt at characterisation of someone else's character. I find original characters sooo much easier. You'll have to forgive my first fiction I'm afraid, for a learnt a lot from the seven or so fictions I have actually completed. I suppose my normal way of doing things just doesn't fit with HP...



Chapter 4: Chapter 3. Never Trust a Slimly Slytherin
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/03/2006
i like your sory but the chapters need to be so short?

Author's Response: This story is so old. Yes I know I have developed through the other what ten fanfictions since this one... Yes I know they are short. I had half and hour I think to write each one, studying full time, working and teaching. My life was a nightmare... It took me time to develop a fast, speedy, fanfiction style that was more well developed and longer. Thanks for you review. I might review this story after I finish one of my four fanfictions in current progress! ~ Illeanah



Chapter 7: Chapter Six. In the Serpent's Mind

Post OotP. Harry must deal with the loss of his Godfather, Hogwarts gets a new Defense Professor with more than a few secrets, and Voldemort watches from the shadows, awaiting a moment to strike. Just a typical year for the Boy-Who-Lived, really...



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 158163; Read Count: 102589; Completed: No

Updated: 07/18/2009; Published: 01/14/2006
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/02/2006
You are getting evil with the clifies. I can't wait for your next update! Really good story. And the Milton Family is a worth addition fo the HP world.


Chapter 20: The Battle of Hogwarts
Home by AJ Potter [All Ages]
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In the summer before sixth year Harry mourns his godfather, but also learns more about him, life, and love, as he searches for a way home.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 10683; Read Count: 4025; Completed: No

Updated: 02/10/2006; Published: 01/20/2006
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/11/2006
This story is developing really well. The problem with the ards and the presence of PEtunia and Harry in Privet Dr. should be only during the "recap" time, right? Otherwise the Dursleys would lost their protection when Harry was at the school. So the ards crashed down because PEtunia went away before the wards were rekindled, right? I'll be waiting gor the rest of the story and maybe a sixth year fic would be nice too.

Author's Response: Yes, the wards need strengthening each year, so for part of each summer both Harry and Petunia need to be there together to renew them. The wards don't crash because Petunia left, its a short weekend trip afterall. However, she is safest within the walls of the house or at least within the wards surrounding it. When she leaves she becomes a target. Her death causes the wards to fall immediately because they have not been renewed completely, and because she is no longer there to keep them in place. Hope that makes sense. I've been seriously considering the sixth year fic, but have not begun work on it yet. Hope you continue to like the story, and please feel free to ask questions whenever you want. Thanks!



Chapter 5: Return to Grimmauld
Seven Tasks by Unreachable Spray [Young Teens]
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This story takes place three years after Harry's seventh year. It begins with Harry falling out of the sky, but then evolves into a journey that will ultimately bring about the final battle with Voldemort and the truth about Severus Snape.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction, Post-Canon
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General
Warnings: Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 9587; Read Count: 2638; Completed: No

Updated: 02/12/2006; Published: 01/29/2006
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/05/2006
It's a well written start and quite interesting. But I, personally, don't like stories that drabble a lot and take too much time to go some place or explain things. i hope you start to show some clear road in the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yep, the next chapter is titled "Revealing" so I think I gave some good information about what's going on. The main focus of the story starts there.



Chapter 2: Appearing
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/13/2006
ok, here interesting, but i'm with Harry: really annoying! So update soon so we can find out what's em merlin's beard is going on!

Author's Response: Yep, after I finish this response I am starting chapter 5. Some answers are waiting for you! :) Thanks for the review!



Chapter 4: Beginning
Can Harry control his vast new well of power before it consumes him? H/G, R/Hr, Post OotP.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Strong Language
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 19214; Read Count: 4597; Completed: No

Updated: 02/09/2006; Published: 01/30/2006
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/01/2006
Quite a interesting story. Ihope you keep updating soon. But there is something you can do to make then options of the size of the font work? Your story was the only one I coudn't make the change.


Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Chamber Cleansing
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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: None
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No

Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/07/2006
interesting idea but the tale isn't too much "human" to be from Hedwig mind? Maybe a bit more of an animal point of view, less explanation and more instict would give a better impression of being the owl's tale.


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Prongslet by Japanime [Young Teens]
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3-year-old Harry is abused by the Dursley’s and is taken to be raised by Sirius and Remus.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU)
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 23207; Read Count: 18416; Completed: No

Updated: 04/20/2007; Published: 02/09/2006
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/11/2006
So far, it's nicely done. I liked the idea of the elemental magic so early on. And Sirius and Remus seemed even prepared to take care of young Harry. They are a couple or just the best of friends? I hope you update soon.

Author's Response: *Smiles* I'm glad you like it so far. I thought it'd be a much better idea to introduce the elemental magic early on in Harry's life so that as the years progressed he'd gain better and better control over them. As to Sirius and Remus, they are just the best of friends. I've read Sirius & Remus raise Harry fics where they are a couple, but I don't think that would suit 'my' story and they way i've planned things out. *Smiles* Anyway, thanks for reviewing! Till next time...(I'll try and post again between today and tomorrow.) ~*Chloe*~



Chapter 2: Prongslet
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/12/2006
Well, I'm here again! I really like where you're taking this. I know is AU but keeping in character with the Dursleys, Harry wouldn't have glasses. In canon he only got them after he went to primary school and the teachers force the Dursleys to check his eyes. Three years is really young to have glasses if the family is not paying attention, right? Keep going, everytime I check and there is a new chapter will make a happy day for me. :)

Author's Response: *Smiles* It's good to see you again! ^^ As to Harry's glasses, in canon Harry was mostly ignored, having to cook and clean here and there, but he wasn't physically abused, just verbally. In my fic he's been abused physically, verbally, and psychologically. They did all these things to him whenever he did something they considered 'wrong.' So, obviously, they would beat him whenever he would mess something up that he was ordered to do thanks to the fact that he couldn't see properly, but Mrs. Figg (who watched Harry from time to time, and who was actually the one who informed Dumbledore of Harry's mistreatment, all this'll be told later in the story) took pity on Harry and took him to a local store on one of the day's that she had him and bought him makeshift glasses that were not perscribed by an eye-doctor. She sternly explained to the Dursley's that Harry obviously had a sight problem, and asked them how in the world they hadn't noticed, and the Dursley's begrudgingly allowed Harry to keep the glasses. (If he would've stayed with the Dursley's Harry would've gotten perscribed glasses when his teacher at primary school realized that his glasses helped, but didn't fic his seeing problem entirely.) Anyway, that was my explination when I began planning for this fic. But, again, this'll all be revieled in the fic. Anywho, I hope that cleared that up. *Smiles* Thanks for reviewing! And I'll try my best to update again between today and tomorrow. ^^ Till then... ~*Chloe*~



Chapter 3: Magic is Real