Penname: hedwig_edwiges [Contact]
Real name: claudia
Member Since: 12/26/2005
Membership status: Member

I'm a Brazilian librarian that feel in love with the Harry Potter world and spent hours and hours reading fanfic, while waiting for the next book from JKR. Now I'm trying my hand in writing something.

As a permanet Author's Note:  since English is a second language for me, I'll ask for forgiveness before you anything I wrote. I use the checking on spelling and grammar from the software but while I don't have a permanent beta, I'm bound to make mistakes.

Thanks for any review and comment.



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So Harry is stuck at Privet Drive once more and has much to think about. A crazed wizard out to kill him. The death of his godfather and friend. The Prophesy looming in front of him. And not even one note from his "friends." That's been Harry's summer break so far and can you blame him for wanting it to end? But should Harry really be looking forward to a year filled with surprises of all kinds and not all of them good?

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, General
Warnings: Mild Language, Strong Violence
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 274902; Read Count: 28235; Completed: Yes

Updated: 03/07/2006; Published: 06/28/2005
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/07/2006
Well, I read the 41 chapter in a roll. First a comment: there are a problem with chapters 35 and 36 - they are the same and the chapters were the second attack to The Burrow should be doesn't exist. After that, let me say this story is quite interesting in its ideas and development and well written too. But don't feel like Harry is really growing or evolving. He study but doesn't seem to develop his abilities that much and his emotions are a wreck all the time. I can understand the nightmares and the toll they shoudl take on him but if he keep dragging it, he should die of depression. On a really personal opinion, I don't think there is need for the repetion on the description of the atrocities. One descriptions and a simple note about repetion is enough. I think I can understand the nightmares but I'mn don't want to have them.


Chapter 41: Click… Sh-keeeeer...

What if the fates that let Harry's parents live the night he got his scar, also gave him a younger sister and let him befriend Ron Weasley earlier? What would be different?



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 223354; Read Count: 118236; Completed: Yes

Updated: 12/26/2006; Published: 08/23/2005
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
01/11/2006
Why this chapter should appear as new since it was published near Christmas? Should have been a different chapter all together or the new chapter wasn't uploaded?

Author's Response: That's right. Everytiime I submit a new chapter for review by the site admin, the previous one reappears. I guess its a glitch or bug in the site.



Chapter 19: End of another schoolyear
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/22/2006
I hope everything goes well with whatever you have to do about your health. And that it's quickly resolve. Because the cliffie it's your way to make us suffer with you, right? ;P Good luck and be save.

Author's Response: Don't worry. I'm better now. Thanks. The next chapter is up for review.



Chapter 26: A couple of Sirius visits
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/23/2006
now Sirius adopt Ti and we have a happy family!


Chapter 27: Where does Ti go?
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/24/2006
it will be nice to see things starting to happen to Harry and Ginny. And Voldy is about to make an appearance?

Author's Response: Oh, you're good. LOL, Thanks for the review.



Chapter 28: Christmas with Ti
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/25/2006
Thanks *blushes timidly (?)* Comes from reading a lot! Books and fanfics alike ;P


Chapter 28: Christmas with Ti
What would life be like for Harry if Sirius’ name were cleared? That he found love in his 4th year at Hogwarts? Been told about the prophecy earlier and life being better with out the dreadful Dursleys? To find these answers simply pull up a chair and find out.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fluff, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 17953; Read Count: 5861; Completed: No

Updated: 12/27/2005; Published: 12/02/2005
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
12/28/2005
Nice idea and should be interesting to see where it goes. But it would also be nice if you work on your spelling and punctuation. And check some names and terms on teh books (quittach ?!). Keep working and you will get better on the style.


Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Arrival at the Weasley’s

At the age of 7 Harry Potter disappeared. 10 years later, the world is in turmoil. The Order of the Phoenix struggles to go on as the Dark Lord reveals his mysterious Apprentice. AU



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), Dark Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Mystery
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Dark Fiction, Sexual Situations, Strong Language, Strong Violence
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 12861; Read Count: 4301; Completed: No

Updated: 04/22/2006; Published: 12/05/2005
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/17/2006
ok, i'm getting worried now... more soon?


Chapter 3: The Writings on the Wall
The finer aspects of Ginny Weasley's life, all entwined, in their own way, within the story of how she wound up with Harry Potter.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff, General
Warnings: Dark Fiction, Mild Language
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 52329; Read Count: 13207; Completed: Yes

Updated: 06/21/2006; Published: 12/14/2005
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/01/2006
This is really an interesting view on the Weasley brothers.


Chapter 5: George Taught Me Well
Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/04/2006
As the others chapters, this is really good. It's quite a view in teh Weasley family. There will be more, like about Molly and Arthur and Ginny talking about herself?


Chapter 6: Ron Was Full of Woe