Thanks for checking out my stuff, and I do hope you enjoy it. I'm currently inactive in the world of fanfic, but please check out my wizard rock project, Snidget, at myspace.com/goldensnidget.
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Thanks for checking out my stuff, and I do hope you enjoy it. I'm currently inactive in the world of fanfic, but please check out my wizard rock project, Snidget, at myspace.com/goldensnidget.
3-year-old Harry is abused by the Dursley’s and is taken to be raised by Sirius and Remus.
Aww, the interaction between the three is so cute! And I loved the constant thoughts of Harry being their last connection to James.
What a sad story, truly.
Oh, little Harry is so accepting it breaks my heart. For a kid to be that broken down... *sigh*
But you write it marvelously.
Well, that happened awful fast.
...but I can't stop giggling over the fact that you just used "glomped" in a story. Tee hee.
Aww, how sad. But they bond together well. Nice job.
...can't wait to see Harry react to Moony being a werewolf. That'll be interesting.
And I love how perceptive your characters are; it seems very natural. Great job, and I look forward to reading more!
...I'm not sure who I feel worse for, poor out-of-depth Harry or never-grew-up-Sirius.
I love this story. Thank you for writing it, and keep up the brilliance. Do take care!
I'm glad you do! ^-^ I'll try and update again soon. Till then...
~*Chloe*~
I always give honest reviews, so please don't hate me or anything! This is well written, but it just seems to bbe missing something. It doesn't really draw me in, and the plot seems built on a lot of OC elements that just... I don't know, it just leaves me feeling like I've missed something.
Your writing itself is good, but the story just doesn't grab your reader's attention, at least not mine.