Penname: ladylarna [Contact]
Real name: Larna
Member Since: 12/06/2005
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Thanks for checking out my stuff, and I do hope you enjoy it. I'm currently inactive in the world of fanfic, but please check out my wizard rock project, Snidget, at myspace.com/goldensnidget.



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Prongslet by Japanime [Young Teens]
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3-year-old Harry is abused by the Dursley’s and is taken to be raised by Sirius and Remus.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU)
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 23207; Read Count: 18419; Completed: No

Updated: 04/20/2007; Published: 02/09/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
06/09/2006

Aww, the interaction between the three is so cute! And I loved the constant thoughts of Harry being their last connection to James.

What a sad story, truly.



Author's Response: ^-^ I had hoped so. As to their thoughts of Harry being their last connection to James, well, I just found it to be very true as I was writting. =) But, yes, it is a sad story at the moment, but as time progresses things'll get better.



Chapter 2: Prongslet
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
06/09/2006

Oh, little Harry is so accepting it breaks my heart. For a kid to be that broken down... *sigh*

But you write it marvelously.



Author's Response: Thanks! ^^ I felt bad for little Harry while I was typing...-Sighs.-



Chapter 3: Magic is Real
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
06/09/2006

Well, that happened awful fast.

...but I can't stop giggling over the fact that you just used "glomped" in a story. Tee hee.



Author's Response: Hehe, 'glomped', I just adore that word. ^-^



Chapter 4: Discussing Important Matters
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
06/09/2006
Good chapter, although I'm glad I don't have to sit on that cliffhanger, haha. Little Harry is adorable, and you make him a darling character.

Author's Response: Lol, yea, I hate sitting on cliffhangers. =P As to Harry being adorable: I'm glad. ^-^ I can't help it, when I write a fic with a child in it, the child just ends up being...adorable...even to me! =P



Chapter 5: Windy Day by the Lake
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
06/09/2006
Yay Hagrid! :) He always saves the day.

Author's Response: Yep! ^^ Gotta love Hagrid! =D



Chapter 6: Returned
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
06/09/2006

Aww, how sad. But they bond together well. Nice job.



Author's Response: ^-^ Thanks!



Chapter 7: Forgiveness
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
06/09/2006

...can't wait to see Harry react to Moony being a werewolf. That'll be interesting.

And I love how perceptive your characters are; it seems very natural. Great job, and I look forward to reading more!



Author's Response: ^-^ Thanks, I had hoped that they seemed natural. Oh, yes, Harry's reaction to Moony being a werewolf will be coming up soon. =) Thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate it! ^-^ The next chapter will be out soon. =D



Chapter 8: Home Sweet Home
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
06/09/2006

...I'm not sure who I feel worse for, poor out-of-depth Harry or never-grew-up-Sirius.

I love this story. Thank you for writing it, and keep up the brilliance. Do take care!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you do! ^-^ I'll try and update again soon. Till then...

~*Chloe*~




Chapter 9: Full Breakfast
The now Headmistress McGonagall forces Harry Potter to stay for his last year at Hogwarts. Thousands of miles away, a young woman, born in England but raised in America opens her letter. This woman is thrust into the strange and wonderful as she attends her first year at Hogwarts. But her year is cut short when a former Professor steals her away to be married to her betrothed so that his line may live on. But there are other desires at work in this strange plot, and Harry must stop this plan from coming to fruition. Other wise, all will have been in vain.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fluff, Mystery
Warnings: Character Death, Dark Fiction, Mild Language, Sexual Situations, Strong Violence
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 92377; Read Count: 3412; Completed: No

Updated: 11/08/2007; Published: 02/09/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
08/19/2006

I always give honest reviews, so please don't hate me or anything! This is well written, but it just seems to bbe missing something. It doesn't really draw me in, and the plot seems built on a lot of OC elements that just... I don't know, it just leaves me feeling like I've missed something.

Your writing itself is good, but the story just doesn't grab your reader's attention, at least not mine.




Chapter 1: The Singing Sensation of Azkaban
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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: None
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No

Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
02/13/2006
Creepy, but a good look at Ginny's views on the world. Nice drabble.

Author's Response: I\'ve been informed that I love angst too much before, but I don\'t think I\'ve ever been told anything I\'ve written is \'creepy\'.... *proud* I have officially obtained creepiness. Muahahaha.



Chapter 1: Lost