Penname: ladylarna [Contact]
Real name: Larna
Member Since: 12/06/2005
Membership status: Member

Thanks for checking out my stuff, and I do hope you enjoy it. I'm currently inactive in the world of fanfic, but please check out my wizard rock project, Snidget, at myspace.com/goldensnidget.



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Sirius Black sits in the kitchen at Grimmauld Place on New Year's Eve when in walks Ginny Weasley. She's pretty and he's a bit smashed but she's supposed to be with Harry. What happens? A missing moment from OotP. Rated R---but you'll be very bored if you're looking for illicit romantic scenes between teenage girls and older men.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Fluff, General
Warnings: Strong Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2412; Read Count: 112; Completed: Yes

Updated: 01/21/2006; Published: 01/21/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
03/31/2006

I can't believe I didn't review this. I'm so, so sorry... because this is one of my favorite pieces on here, and I know I've read it more than once. Really, I love it to death. Your characters are so real, and the whole thing is just appropriate and edgy. It gets me every time.

Thanks for writing this. It's brilliant. Rock on, and do take care!




Chapter 1: 17 Minutes Till Midnight in Casablanca
Shadow of the Serpent by KEDme [Young Teens]
starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 32]
The sequel to Home Alone. Harry is whisked away to an ancient island to be trained in Occlumency. What he finds is another complication to add to his already complicated life. Will friendship, love, loyalty, bravery, and honor be enough to save him from the Shadow of the Serpent that haunts his life? H/G, with some R/H in later chapters.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 220899; Read Count: 38806; Completed: Yes

Updated: 03/08/2007; Published: 01/22/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
03/13/2006

Amazing start with this (don't worry, I plan on reading the other parts, but I wanted to go ahead an comment now while this was fresh in my mind). I stumbled upon this, and I'm so glad I did! Aside from a few minor grammatical errors, this is really fantastic. You kept Dumbledore very IC, which is extremely hard to do, so props for that. Your writing style in general is great, and I loved the beginning of this... it completely drew me in.

Well, I suppose I'll keep reading now. Just wanted to share my thoughts! Rock on!




Chapter 1: Prologue
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
03/13/2006
Alright, you've now proven to me that the last chapter was not a fluke and that you're really just an awesome writer. Great job (worth a comment for every chapter, that's how good this is) and I loved Ginny's thoughts on the bonding, they were absolutely perfect. You write Harry marvelously as well, so hoorah for you and this story!


Chapter 3: Tlilli Tlapalla
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
03/13/2006
Okay, so my computer somehow skipped a chapter in here, so now I'm a little confused but I'll go back and reread everything in the proper order. This chapter was good too, so keep it up! Thanks and do take care!


Chapter 2: The Return
Believe by PhoenixFirebolt [All Ages]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Christmas is a time when miracles supposedly happen. But for Ginny, ever since Draco left her to fight in the Second War, Christmas has not held the same meaning. She's about to realize though that all you really have to do is believe.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Alternate Universe
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2308; Read Count: 554; Completed: Yes

Updated: 01/23/2006; Published: 01/23/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/03/2006

Aww, that was super cute! Seriously, I almost cried which never happens to me with these ships. Super convincing, and a great job all around. Could have used the slightest bit more of development, but the ending was brilliant.

Take care!




Chapter 1: Believe
Harry plans on making this Hermione's best birthday ever. But does he . . . ?

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Humor
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2490; Read Count: 401; Completed: Yes

Updated: 01/24/2006; Published: 01/24/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/04/2006
Haha, this was amusing. I loved the mixed-up message... brilliant.

Author's Response:

Yay!  Another happy reader!  And, the best part is, it\'s a real anagram, too!  Try it, if you like!  Thanks for the review, glad I could entertain you!

 Read, rewview, and enjoy!




Chapter 1: Allergies and Anagrams

Oh Tom, what went wrong? Was it really Mr. Slytherin? If it was, does that mean that little Tom Riddle was still trapped way in the back of your head when you died? Did Salazar Slytherin completely drown out the good in you or could you find it if you tried very hard?



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Dark Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Dark Fiction
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1831; Read Count: 436; Completed: Yes

Updated: 01/27/2006; Published: 01/27/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
03/14/2006

This was an interesting twist, and a very original concept. Nice job on this, and hoorah for anything inspired by Wicked!

 Take care, and thanks for this!




Chapter 1: One Shot
A List of -ings by Buttamellow [Young Teens]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Ginny reasons with herself that she should hate Harry.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 877; Read Count: 644; Completed: Yes

Updated: 02/03/2006; Published: 02/03/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
02/03/2006
That was really good... you totally got into Ginny's head and showed us her thought process. The ending was truly suitable for her character. Nice job on this!


Chapter 1: Drabble
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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: None
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No

Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
02/04/2006
"The fact hit him like a Stupefy curse." That line was really great, and seemed to stand out for some reason; perhaps because it's such a strong tribute to realistic life in the wizarding world. Nice job on this... you could have gone into a bit more detail, but you did a good job making sure that the song didn't overpower the text or vice-versa. This was vaguely depressing, but a very smooth read.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. :) Most of my ddrabbles are sad and angsty... I can't help it. I'm not good at writing happiness. :D -Crs



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Prongslet by Japanime [Young Teens]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]

3-year-old Harry is abused by the Dursley’s and is taken to be raised by Sirius and Remus.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU)
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 23207; Read Count: 18419; Completed: No

Updated: 04/20/2007; Published: 02/09/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
06/09/2006
Yay! I can already tell this story shall be quite lovely. Watch some punctuation, mostly apostrophes (plurals don't need them). But beyond that, good start and I'm glad there are a bunch more chapters published.

Author's Response: ^-^ Yay, I'm glad you think so! As to the punctuation, -Sheepish smile-, yea, sorry about that...



Chapter 1: Unexpected News