Penname: ladylarna [Contact]
Real name: Larna
Member Since: 12/06/2005
Membership status: Member

Thanks for checking out my stuff, and I do hope you enjoy it. I'm currently inactive in the world of fanfic, but please check out my wizard rock project, Snidget, at myspace.com/goldensnidget.



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Reviews by ladylarna
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Padma had everything she could ever dream of: the perfect flat, the perfect job, the perfect girlfriend. Happiness was an open road before her feet - until everything changed. Ten scenes from Padma's life after she finds herself as a comrade in Lavender's battle against AIDS. A battle she refuses to lose because the prize is Lavender's life. Padma/Lavender femslash. A story about AIDS.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Slash, Strong Language
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 31402; Read Count: 982; Completed: Yes

Updated: 10/23/2006; Published: 10/23/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
10/24/2006

"things changes" <---should be 'change,' somewhere in the Hermione-Padma conversation.

 I've told you already how wonderful this story is, but I thought I'd say it again after rereading the ending. Marvelous portrayal of these characters and their situation... it did indeed make me cry.

Thanks for writing it! And I think posting in ten points was a good decision.




Chapter 10: The AIDS Epidemic
Ron's Gauntlet by Oppungo [All Ages]
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When Ron receives a strange owl instructing him to take part in a mysterious maze, promising him treasure, excitement and glory he can't resist but to find out more. What could be better than having his name go down in the history books? Only not having his death recorded alongside it...


Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 6149; Read Count: 506; Completed: Yes

Updated: 10/24/2006; Published: 10/24/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
10/28/2006

"Hmm, we didn't almost die that much in third year..."

Haha! Oh, this was the oddest bit of fanfiction I've ever read. Fairly well written, though, and occasionally amusing. Keep writing!




Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hide and Seek by Megan Hogan [Mid Teens]
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When everything gets to be too much, who knows what will happen...



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Dark Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death, Dark Fiction, Strong Violence
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1075; Read Count: 430; Completed: Yes

Updated: 11/17/2006; Published: 11/16/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/18/2006

Interesting writing; try breaking up the paragraphs to suit the mood of the piece, it would have done well to appear a bit more broken and a tad more desperate.

But it's done really well. :) Keep experimenting!



Author's Response:

Thanks, it was writin very quivkly and is yet to be beta'd so it's not at its best at the moment. If you enjoyed, why not try some of my other pieces?

Megan Hogan xx




Chapter 1: Hide and Seek

Harry, Ron, and Hermione are leaving for the Horcrux hunt. This is the story of their goodbyes. Oneshot. Minimal angsty H/G.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1289; Read Count: 572; Completed: Yes

Updated: 11/18/2006; Published: 11/16/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/18/2006

That last set of lines is amazing. Really, truly, fabulous.

Good writing. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I really appreciate your kind words and your taking the time to review.  =)




Chapter 1: Quōs Amor Vērus Tenuit, Tenēbit

Slughorn's POV after Riddle becomes Voldemort



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 128; Read Count: 421; Completed: Yes

Updated: 11/17/2006; Published: 11/17/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/18/2006

This is pretty good, and given how picky I am about drabbles, you know that's high praise.

It could still be perfected for more impact, and I didn't really like the 'stench of guilt' phrase (it smells bad? just struck me oddly, meh), but this was really good. Cheers for improvement!




Chapter 1: Chapter 1
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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: None
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No

Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/21/2006
Haha, aww, that was cute. You write them well together without making them completely together. Very nicely done.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!  Harry and Luna are rather cute together, in my opinion.  Anyway, thanks for the nice review Larnagrace!  :D



Chapter 1: Together

Little Harry misses his parents while the Dursleys watch a movie.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Songfic
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1093; Read Count: 645; Completed: Yes

Updated: 11/23/2006; Published: 11/22/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/23/2006

You could have done better on this. The age didn't come through clearly at all, and some of it pulled on the kind of cliches one expects to see in underdeveloped Dursley abuse fanfiction. You also... with a songfic, you have to make sure that the song really adds to the story and that the story is complimented by the song. Uraj, you can write better than this.




Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A storm, a broken doll, and contemplations about family and love. Not everyone is privileged with it.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1616; Read Count: 349; Completed: Yes

Updated: 11/25/2006; Published: 11/24/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/25/2006
This story feels familiar to me, as though I've read it before, so my apologies if I've already reviewed it elsewhere. :) It's a marvelous touching little piece, and I like it very much.

Author's Response:

You may have read it before as it's posted over at FA, but I wanted to try a new site out with some old and new fanfics of mine and thought this looked nice. Thanks.




Chapter 1: Chapter 1
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When Sirius Black's will is discovered in Grimmauld Place, Remus Lupin has doubts about who he is and who he has been in regards to Harry Potter. Some of could pass for meaningful, but some of it couldn't really pass as anything. Regardless of how much sense it makes, Nymphadora Tonks is only too happy to snap him out of his ridiculous funk.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2190; Read Count: 322; Completed: No

Updated: 11/26/2006; Published: 11/26/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/27/2006

Fabulous. This was a wonderful little look at the way Remus's mind works, and I loved it.

Keep up the awesome writing; I love your style.



Author's Response: Thanks.  I'm glad you enjoyed.  I hope to have more time to write and get more fics up!



Chapter 1: Chapter 1
A parody to Charles Dickens' A Christmas Carol with Vernon playing Scrooge

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), Dark Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Dark Fiction, Mild Language
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 8978; Read Count: 2917; Completed: No

Updated: 07/07/2007; Published: 11/29/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/29/2006

Well, you know how I feel about parodies, but I think you did a fair job in writing this. Keep it up... let your imagination run with this one!




Chapter 1: Bah! Humbug