"things changes" <---should be 'change,' somewhere in the Hermione-Padma conversation.

 I've told you already how wonderful this story is, but I thought I'd say it again after rereading the ending. Marvelous portrayal of these characters and their situation... it did indeed make me cry.

Thanks for writing it! And I think posting in ten points was a good decision.

"Hmm, we didn't almost die that much in third year..."

Haha! Oh, this was the oddest bit of fanfiction I've ever read. Fairly well written, though, and occasionally amusing. Keep writing!

Interesting writing; try breaking up the paragraphs to suit the mood of the piece, it would have done well to appear a bit more broken and a tad more desperate.

But it's done really well. :) Keep experimenting!

That last set of lines is amazing. Really, truly, fabulous.

Good writing. :)

This is pretty good, and given how picky I am about drabbles, you know that's high praise.

It could still be perfected for more impact, and I didn't really like the 'stench of guilt' phrase (it smells bad? just struck me oddly, meh), but this was really good. Cheers for improvement!

You could have done better on this. The age didn't come through clearly at all, and some of it pulled on the kind of cliches one expects to see in underdeveloped Dursley abuse fanfiction. You also... with a songfic, you have to make sure that the song really adds to the story and that the story is complimented by the song. Uraj, you can write better than this.

Fabulous. This was a wonderful little look at the way Remus's mind works, and I loved it.

Keep up the awesome writing; I love your style.

Well, you know how I feel about parodies, but I think you did a fair job in writing this. Keep it up... let your imagination run with this one!