Penname: ladylarna [Contact]
Real name: Larna
Member Since: 12/06/2005
Membership status: Member

Thanks for checking out my stuff, and I do hope you enjoy it. I'm currently inactive in the world of fanfic, but please check out my wizard rock project, Snidget, at myspace.com/goldensnidget.



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How James and Lily finally got together.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction, Pre-Canon
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1259; Read Count: 484; Completed: No

Updated: 12/17/2005; Published: 12/17/2005
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
12/17/2005
Cute start. I usually don't read fics with the Marauding crew, but you've done a nice job with it so far. I particularly like your Sirius; he's perfectly written. Good work, you two! Take care!


Chapter 1: Pranking A Prankster
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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No

Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/21/2006

Interesting... very different. I'm sure you completely convince of your chosen point of view, but it's a good effort.

Keep writing! :)




Chapter 1: Ever
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It’s a regular day for Paravati: gossipping with Lavender, lusting after hot guys, and listening to her friend’s endless stories about everyone else. She picks the wrong guy to flirt with today, though, and Ginny’s not happy. When her spell causes Parvati to fall in love with an apple, how far will Parvati have to embarrass herself before Ginny’s satisfied that she’s learned her lesson?

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Humor
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2056; Read Count: 609; Completed: Yes

Updated: 12/25/2005; Published: 12/25/2005
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/07/2006
Hahaha! Oh, that was hysterical! Brilliant job, and thanks for the laugh.


Chapter 1: An Apple A Day
She will always be there for him.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 795; Read Count: 412; Completed: Yes

Updated: 12/26/2005; Published: 12/26/2005
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
02/04/2006
This was a nice capture of Ginny's devotion to Harry. Almost creepy, but you clearly have a well-thought-out understanding of her. One nit-pick was that Hermione said something "reverently" that probably needn't be reverent, but beyond that this was a nice little drabble.


Chapter 1: Always Strong
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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
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Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
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Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
02/26/2006
Aww, that was adorable. Super cute, and I'm glad I found this (randomly clicking=lovely drabbles). Details could have been developed a tad more, but hey, it's a late-night drabble so I'll not complain. Nice job with this, and it made me smile. They're so sigh-worthy when they're together.

Author's Response: glad you liked it!  I could have put more detail in it...but I meant it to be vague  :)



Chapter 1: Hopeless
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"Harry," Cedric said, and kissed him. Drabble-esque.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 509; Read Count: 466; Completed: Yes

Updated: 01/01/2006; Published: 01/01/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/03/2006

Supercute. I'm a major Ced/Harry fan, and this was great. You did both of them so well!

 Rock on!




Chapter 1: Two Moments Before a Fall
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Ginny is not too pleased when Harry tells her she can't look for the horcruxes with him.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1170; Read Count: 601; Completed: Yes

Updated: 01/06/2006; Published: 01/06/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/21/2006

Interesting and nicely structure. I just think it could use a good deal of polish; this has a lot of potential. Watch your grammar (should be 'couldn't bear' and not 'couldn't bare') and try to give the pice a more natural flow.

The interaction between them was unusually perceptive, so well done.



Author's Response: Thank for the notice with regards to grammar, I haven't edited these fics yet so I will get around to that in due time! I'm glad you enjoyed it..why not try some of my others? Megan Hogan xx



Chapter 1: Amor omnia vincit
How Ginny would feel if the worst happened?

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 699; Read Count: 458; Completed: Yes

Updated: 01/06/2006; Published: 01/06/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/21/2006
Clearly, I took your advice to read your other stories. ;) This one had really strong emotion, and it was compelling. Again, just try developing your pieces into something longer - that, or try confining yourself to a specific small wordcount (like 100 words). For a story like this, try and make your word choice more precise and make every sentence really count... you have a lot of potential, and I'd really love to see something of yours fully polished and brought to full potential. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, it's really encouraging to read reviews like this...i will be taking my fcs down asap to edit them! Megan Hogan xx



Chapter 1: Contemplation
Regulus by Megan Hogan [Mid Teens]
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Just before he dies, we discover that perhaps Regulus was not as bad as we all thought.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: Character Death, Dark Fiction, Strong Violence
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 866; Read Count: 358; Completed: Yes

Updated: 01/08/2006; Published: 01/08/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/21/2006
A very well-done characterization, and the last line was stellar. Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks ladylarna! It\'s great getting everyone\'s reviews! If you liked this one you might want to check out my other stories and if you like those, take a look at my novel length (unfinished) on www.harrypotterfanfiction.com!



Chapter 1: Regulus

Post OotP. Harry must deal with the loss of his Godfather, Hogwarts gets a new Defense Professor with more than a few secrets, and Voldemort watches from the shadows, awaiting a moment to strike. Just a typical year for the Boy-Who-Lived, really...



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 158163; Read Count: 102623; Completed: No

Updated: 07/18/2009; Published: 01/14/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
06/30/2006

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...you are amazing, Jamesy. That was intense. Brilliant chapter, though I must admit I was partial to the one that came before it in regards to sheer emotional overload, and brilliant story. This is like a storm... it spends forever brewing, and when the rain and lightning is fully unleashed, everything gets torn to pieces.

Marvelous work. I'm in awe. :) Unfortunately, awe cannot be properly expressed via emoticons, so you get a smiley face instead. Oh well. I'm fairly certain your imagination will suffice.



Author's Response: Coming from you, that means a lot, Cheers, Mandrea! :D



Chapter 35: End of an Era