Heh, this was amusing. I finally read it because it was recc'd again in the chat, and I'm glad I did (I'll admit, your title kept me away).

Keep writing!

Reaaaaaaaaally interesting. Ha, fidelius on Hogwarts. The thought amuses.

This is marvelous, and I'm sorry it hasn't yet found an audience here. Great work!

I've read this before, obviously, and I'm a fan. :) So rereading it will be a delight.

This chapter could use some polish, but beyond that it's great. :) Glad to see you posting!

A good piece that came together well. I didn't like that the first part was past tense - 'hated' - while the rest was 'hates.' While I can understand why you did it, you're writing all from that specific moment in time and so they should all be present.

Beyond that, it was good. A tad repetitive, but good overall and it was refreshing to see someone trying a different writing style.

The concept of this was great, but I must say I felt rather cheated. This had the potential for a lot of depth, and if you sat and properly developed it, the story could make quite an engaging oneshot.

To me, the piece felt very awkward... I'm not sure if it's just your writing style or if it didn't get enough editing attention, but the lines felt very forced and some of the words seemed out of place. Lines like, "After a minute or two of quiet reflection in the depths of their anxieties, Ron and Hermione both concluded their next move." The words don't come together properly, so it halts the natural flow of the story.

I hope you don't look at this as a flame or anything of the sort; I feel your drabble has enormous potential to be something more. If you ever decide to develop it further and work on it with a few betas (both steps I highly encourage), let me know if you post another version of this. It's a really great concept, a sweet idea indeed that just needs a little polish.

Take care and keep writing!