Penname: ladylarna [Contact]
Real name: Larna
Member Since: 12/06/2005
Membership status: Member

Thanks for checking out my stuff, and I do hope you enjoy it. I'm currently inactive in the world of fanfic, but please check out my wizard rock project, Snidget, at myspace.com/goldensnidget.



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Dumbledore finds his powers beginning to decline, while Voldemort's are growing.  Harry discovers new powers, but will the Wizarding World accept them?  The Prophecy is revealed to all, but is it open to different interpretations?  Harry's 6th year, No HBP spoilers.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General
Warnings: Alcohol and/or Drug Abuse, Character Death, Mild Language, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations, Strong Violence
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 40835; Read Count: 4694; Completed: No

Updated: 12/23/2006; Published: 06/28/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
10/28/2006

Ah, back to the action! You did good handling Voldemort, very well written.

Be careful when using italics... if you're using them for thoughts, make sure that only the thoughts are italicized.

Very awesome chapter! I loved reading it.



Author's Response: Thank you.  This was the most fun chapter for me to write so far.  As they say, the board is set and the pieces are in motion.  Hope you continue to read along.



Chapter 4: Until The End
Harry, Ron and Hermione are about to set off on their hunt for the Horcruxes. When a strange old man turns up, and tells them that the only way for them to defeat Voldemort is to travel back in time, what will they do?

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Mystery
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 6811; Read Count: 1898; Completed: No

Updated: 07/17/2006; Published: 06/29/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
07/18/2006
A nice prologue to a promising story. Your writing style is rather strong, so awesome.


Chapter 1: Prologue - The Guardians of Time
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
07/18/2006

*laughs at how stupid they are for discussing horcruxes out loud*

A nice chapter with interesting OCs, so good job handling that. Your writing needs a little polish, but nice plot so far.




Chapter 2: Godric's Hollow
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
07/18/2006

Creepy cool. A good chapter, and I look forward to the next one. This is going to be great! :)

Thanks for this, and take care!




Chapter 3: The Pools of Time
This Fire by Alexandria Malfoy [Young Teens]
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Ever why Ginny didn't throw a fit when Draco kissed her at the end of 'Sleeping To Dream'? Documents Ginny as Draco makes his way through the girls of Gryffindor in search of his 'dream girl'. Loosely based on Franz Ferdinand's 'This Fire'. Sequel to 'Sleeping To Dream'.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Songfic
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2874; Read Count: 479; Completed: Yes

Updated: 06/29/2006; Published: 06/29/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
08/06/2006
Interesting characterization of Ginny, really good. A different way of doing a songfic... but I guess it worked. Good job.


Chapter 1: This Fire

"There are many things that I/ Would like to say to you/ But I don't know how..." As Ginny lies in St. Mungo's on the verge of death, Draco gathers the courage to tell Ginny how he really feels about her. D/G



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Songfic
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2457; Read Count: 428; Completed: Yes

Updated: 06/29/2006; Published: 06/29/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
06/30/2006
Good work on this. A nice piece.


Chapter 1: Wonderwall
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James Potter and Sirius Black have some final words they'd like to share with Harry, and the only way they can do that is by writing him letters. Harry finds them, and is changed forevermore.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2662; Read Count: 440; Completed: Yes

Updated: 07/05/2006; Published: 07/05/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
08/06/2006

One of the best 'write Harry a letter' ficlets I've seen. Brilliant, absolutely. Your James was a delight to read, and he and Lily were completely real together.

You did need a line break where you switched point-of-views, though. Just a note. But this was great, seriously. Awesome job.




Chapter 1: Sheets of Wisdom
Escape from Destiny. All Medea wants is to be free from society's constrains; free to make her own decisions. But when she finds out she had more in store than she ever imagined, will she be able to outwit fate? Set in Italy circa 1202.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction, Pre-Canon
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Mild Violence
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 757; Read Count: 328; Completed: No

Updated: 07/11/2006; Published: 07/11/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
08/06/2006

Really, really interesting. The 'angels don't wear armor' line stuck with me... made me think of Armageddon Summer, actually.

Marvelous writing.




Chapter 1: Prologue

Six years have passed since Harry won the war, opening to him a future as the Hero. However, his victory has been costly and, seeking a new life, he chooses to take desperate measures to start from scratch, leaving everything he knew behind. Now his flight from a life he doesn’t want has led him to France – only to land him face to face with a ghost from his past.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Slash, Strong Language
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 37669; Read Count: 406; Completed: No

Updated: 10/30/2006; Published: 07/14/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/02/2006

The flashbacks were heartwrenching. I wanted to cry.

I mean, the rest of this was marvelously crafted and full of emotion - god, I can just follow every thought that Harry has, and all of his decisions - but the flashbacks in particular were brilliant.

An amazing chapter, to be certain. Can't wait for more. :)




Chapter 3: (Face to Face)
Ginny finds out just what it is that Harry is fighting for.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2205; Read Count: 541; Completed: Yes

Updated: 07/15/2006; Published: 07/14/2006
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
07/17/2006

Cute!

“Do be rather quick with this whole saving the world thing, will you?”

Very nice. It seemed a little choppy and forced at certain points, so my advice would be to work on your flow a little bit, but this was very nice.




Chapter 1: Worth Fighting For