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Thanks for checking out my stuff, and I do hope you enjoy it. I'm currently inactive in the world of fanfic, but please check out my wizard rock project, Snidget, at myspace.com/goldensnidget.
Ah, back to the action! You did good handling Voldemort, very well written.
Be careful when using italics... if you're using them for thoughts, make sure that only the thoughts are italicized.
Very awesome chapter! I loved reading it.
*laughs at how stupid they are for discussing horcruxes out loud*
A nice chapter with interesting OCs, so good job handling that. Your writing needs a little polish, but nice plot so far.
Creepy cool. A good chapter, and I look forward to the next one. This is going to be great! :)
Thanks for this, and take care!
Ever why Ginny didn't throw a fit when Draco kissed her at the end of 'Sleeping To Dream'? Documents Ginny as Draco makes his way through the girls of Gryffindor in search of his 'dream girl'. Loosely based on Franz Ferdinand's 'This Fire'. Sequel to 'Sleeping To Dream'.
"There are many things that I/ Would like to say to you/ But I don't know how..." As Ginny lies in St. Mungo's on the verge of death, Draco gathers the courage to tell Ginny how he really feels about her. D/G
One of the best 'write Harry a letter' ficlets I've seen. Brilliant, absolutely. Your James was a delight to read, and he and Lily were completely real together.
You did need a line break where you switched point-of-views, though. Just a note. But this was great, seriously. Awesome job.
Really, really interesting. The 'angels don't wear armor' line stuck with me... made me think of Armageddon Summer, actually.
Marvelous writing.
Six years have passed since Harry won the war, opening to him a future as the Hero. However, his victory has been costly and, seeking a new life, he chooses to take desperate measures to start from scratch, leaving everything he knew behind. Now his flight from a life he doesn’t want has led him to France – only to land him face to face with a ghost from his past.
The flashbacks were heartwrenching. I wanted to cry.
I mean, the rest of this was marvelously crafted and full of emotion - god, I can just follow every thought that Harry has, and all of his decisions - but the flashbacks in particular were brilliant.
An amazing chapter, to be certain. Can't wait for more. :)
Cute!
“Do be rather quick with this whole saving the world thing, will you?”
Very nice. It seemed a little choppy and forced at certain points, so my advice would be to work on your flow a little bit, but this was very nice.