Penname: Madeline Fabray [Contact]
Real name: April
Member Since: 11/26/2005
Membership status: Member

Hiya! I'm a 31-year-old Buckeye who is addicted to Harry Potter (but hey, aren't we all?) I work for a company that publishes local weekly papers and have gone back to school full time for my MLIS. Most of my peers think I'm insane, and I don't contradict them.

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Reviews by Madeline Fabray
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In a time when magic is legendary and it's practicers revered, a single girl stands alone to face her untimely fate. Another awaits a future already decided, shackled by the bonds of society. Brought together by one boy forging his own destiny, they follow blindly a man who speaks of the world and how it must be saved. A prophecy is spoken and a umbrageous friend appears, sending all comfort into chaos. It is the story of the four founders, and how they unwittingly changed the future forever.





Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction, Pre-Canon
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, General
Warnings: Mild Language, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 13355; Read Count: 2334; Completed: No

Updated: 08/20/2006; Published: 04/15/2006
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
04/21/2006
A very interesting start. I love your descriptions, and in less than 1,000 words, there is already a lot of tension and conflict.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. I\'m glad it was intertaining, \'cause that is what I do. Conflict, while intended though was not the main point of the chapter, but I\'m not complaining if that\'s the way it came across. Conflict, afterall, is the base of many relationships.



Chapter 1: Prologue
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
04/21/2006
I think "Okay" is more of a modern word, but I'm liking this so far.

Author's Response: Totally. Ir really struggled to come up with a better term for that and some of the things while, fitting in other places did not fit in that particular scene. And, every body can connect with \"Okay\". \'As you wish\" and \"Assuredly\" are not used as much.



Chapter 2: Chapter One: A Decade Begins…

Sirius Black, the most sought after male in the history of Hogwarts, has just had another successful Friday night...but the girl he's with is not who he expected (one shot, rated for implied sex and some language, total humour!!!)



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Humor
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Mild Language, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 911; Read Count: 498; Completed: Yes

Updated: 04/19/2006; Published: 04/15/2006
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
04/19/2006
*snicker* That was rather amusing. I'd pity poor Sirius, but ...well, he had it coming. Wonder how she got wrapped up in it, though?

Author's Response: Well, Lily is dating James, who is a bad influence...lol. I\'m glad you like it!



Chapter 1: One Shot
I fell in love with Sirius when I was 11, and I haven’t quite been able to get him out of my head since. Of course, I never thought he had noticed me. Not me, the little short girl from Hufflepuff who would sooner have chopped her own head off than harmed another living creature. Not that he wasn’t a nice person, but he did do some horrible things to that poor Severus Snape, who was a git himself, I suppose. But I still don’t think he deserve to be dropped from a great height into the almost frozen lake wearing practically no clothes. Mandy thought it was hilarious, but that’s because she wanted to get into James Potter’s pants...


Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Humor
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff, General
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2023; Read Count: 473; Completed: Yes

Updated: 04/15/2006; Published: 04/15/2006
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
04/16/2006
Cute, especially Mrs. Datson, and her efforts of trying to fly on a mop.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! ^__^



Chapter 1: One-Shot
Bellatrix and Severus once loved each other, but circumstances would not allow them to be together. An explanation on why they are who they are today. (*cough* because I am stupid, I couldn't add the warning about the sex. But yeah, there's sex...Bella/Sev)

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Songfic
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2449; Read Count: 83; Completed: Yes

Updated: 04/15/2006; Published: 04/15/2006
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
04/17/2006
A very dark tale, indeed, especially seeing how both wind up. Did part of your story repeat?

Author's Response: >.> I just realized that it did. Meh, fixed it. Thanks for telling me! ^_^



Chapter 1: One Shot
Mr. Padfoot is rather upset at the way his relationship with Mr. Moony has been embraced by the public. He would like to state that it is not his fault he loves Mr. Moony, and that fangirls should stop trying to make him dump his boyfriend and go out with them instead. So, Mr. Padfoot will tell you about his relationship with Mr. Moony, with the help of Miss Black, who is allowing Mr. Padfoot access to her account (and is much nicer than my cousin, despite having stolen her name). Please listen (read?) carefully, for Mr. Padfoot will not repeat himself.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Slash
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 4266; Read Count: 2244; Completed: No

Updated: 04/16/2006; Published: 04/15/2006
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
04/16/2006
An interesting start. A bit unusual of an approach, but it hooks the reader.

Author's Response: Thank you. That\'s what I was going for! ^__^



Chapter 1: Preface
Managing Mischief by Menya [Young Teens]
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Just how did Fred and George figure out the password to the map?

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Humor
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 6691; Read Count: 614; Completed: Yes

Updated: 04/16/2006; Published: 04/15/2006
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
04/16/2006
This is one of the best "how Fred and George got the map" stories I've read. I love Fred and George anyway, and their banter (not to mention their teasing Percy) was spot on. I like the insults/hints the map gives. The ending was more serious than I expected, but I like, even if it does end the story on almost a melancholy note.


Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Vengeance by Jasmine_Signet [Mid Teens]
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When Fred and George finally manage to get Firewhiskey in Hermione's drink, the results are disastrous. Now Hermione's bouncing around the school, hyper, convinced that Voldemort is in the castle and hunting them all down - and now with Draco and Hermione both seeking revenge on the twins... Hogwarts is not the place to be. DM/HG (Also on fanfiction.net)

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Humor
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Mild Violence, Sexual Situations, Strong Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2250; Read Count: 515; Completed: No

Updated: 04/18/2006; Published: 04/18/2006
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
04/18/2006
Well, that was an interesting start! I'm a bit surprised Fred and George don't show a wee bit more remorse, since this is Hermione. Watch the formatting, some of your story is a bit off-kilter.


Chapter 1: Chapter 1
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In a post war Hogwarts Hermione discovers a devastating secret that shakes her world and causes her to take a step back and re-evaluate everything within her life. Meanwhile Severus’s long-time obsession begins to spiral dangerously out of control and it will affect everyone around him… even those he didn’t believe mattered.

 

Hermione/Severus



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, General, Mystery
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Sexual Situations, Strong Language, Strong Violence
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 29264; Read Count: 1019; Completed: No

Updated: 05/18/2006; Published: 04/19/2006
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
04/23/2006
Interesting start. I wonder if Snape needs to be a bit more snarky, even in his thoughts. Poor Hermione, betrayed by the two she's closest to.

Author's Response: This is only the beginning of the tale, and this is a post war Hogwarts. So I\'m going with the idea that Severus has somewhat mellowed without the pressures of double agent. Although, he\'ll always be snakry Snape ^.^



Chapter 1: Shattered Stars
Harry is spending his final day at the Dursleys' before he heads off to the Burrow for the long-awaited wedding of Bill and Fleur. It turns out to be a very wild day. After that, it's Horcrux hunt all the way, with a bit of surprises in the middle. POST HBP. Romances are: R/H, H/G

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Humor
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 6945; Read Count: 2021; Completed: No

Updated: 04/22/2006; Published: 04/20/2006
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
04/21/2006

“Actually, I have three things to say about that,” Harry retorted. “Firstly, I have done magic loads of times outside of school, and I have not yet been expelled; two, I am the almighty-protected-by-love Harry Potter. Why would the Ministry take the magic away from me when I am the one person to stand up to Voldemort and not have been murdered on the spot? And now we move on to my third point. I do believe it is now legal for me to do magic outside of school because I am no longer underage. So, Uncle, I can do magic whenever I bloody well feel like it.”

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Author's Response: How do you make a quote for the site? And thank you for the review.



Chapter 1: The Wedding Went...Well