Reviews by blackvengeance
Chocolate Cauldrons and Bedtime Stories by HeathyrAnn [Mid Teens]
Love compels us to do peculiar things.
R/Hr with a side of H/G
*An HBP missing moment*
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 8286; Read Count: 1344; Completed: Yes
R/Hr with a side of H/G
*An HBP missing moment*
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 8286; Read Count: 1344; Completed: Yes
Updated: 11/06/2005; Published: 10/20/2005
Reviewer: blackvengeance (Signed)
11/20/2005
This is really good! Your punctuation is a bit dodgy sometimes at the end of sentences when you use both a comma and a fullstop, but other than that, it's really great! I love missing moments, and this really fits well with the story. Good job.
Chapter 1: Advice
Crux of the Matter: Missing Scenes by mjc [Mid Teens]
What Ginny had to say to Harry when he arrived at the Burrow.
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction, Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2892; Read Count: 1058; Completed: No
Updated: 01/12/2006; Published: 11/02/2005
Reviewer: blackvengeance (Signed)
11/20/2005
Nice content, but a little too much dialogue and sometimes a little hard to understand, but maybe that's just me. Anyway, I really enjoyed the H/G-ness of it, and Ginny's angry reaction was pretty in character.
Chapter 1: Chapter One: Missing Scene