Holy crud, that was freaking amazing! I say that as both somebody who's been there, trying for that perfect exposure and contrast, and just as somebody who enjoyed the story! I don't think I've ever seen Colin this well written. Most people tend to stereotype him, but you gave him the means and a motive to become a character with depth! Jeez, wow! I liked the character of Brandon, teasing yet supportive. And the description of the magical photo process was absolutely brilliant! Great metaphors...and I do believe I am now a Colin/Luna shipper.
Chapter 1: Capturing Luna