Penname: OpenSecret_xox [Contact]
Real name: Sarmista
Member Since: 07/29/2009
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There is a new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher at Hogwarts. She is young, likeable and now, dead! Who killed her and why?

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Minerva McGonagall, Ron Weasley; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Mystery
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Language, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 9423; Read Count: 4386; Completed: Yes

Updated: 05/31/2009; Published: 05/31/2009
Reviewer: OpenSecret_xox (Signed)
07/29/2009

Heyy.. I also really like the twists and turns! ^_^ .. Also how you asked directly towards the readers with questions. As well as changing the font style for some words which was really well done. But there was a time when the codes was visible (<I>please</I>). However, other than that, wonderful.

A great ending too, even though it was tragic that she had died accidently.. & to add onto that, who would have guessed that she was pregnant?!? Speaking of which, your story really made me read on till the very end. ^_^



Author's Response:

just saw this one sorry.  thank you for the review I'm glad you liked it.  I'll see if I can fix those coding errors.




Chapter 6: The Truth Comes Out