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Reviews by Nieriel Raina
The Elves Have Gone Away by Gmariam [All Ages]
A poem about the Elves, perhaps written by Bilbo in Rivendell.
Categories: Lord of the Rings; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Poetry
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 125; Read Count: 436; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03/27/2009; Published: 03/27/2009
Reviewer: Nieriel Raina (Signed)
07/29/2009
Oh my goodness! This could have indeed been written by Mr. Bilbo Baggins! (or Tolkien himself!) Just lovely! Very moving and excellent prose. Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading this poem! I'm so glad you liked it, it was the first LOTR piece I wrote and submitted and I'm sort of fond of it (and like it better than my sonnet, really - must be a hobbit thing, lol) Thank you for the lovely review, I really appreciate it! ~Gina :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
A poem in sonnet form about the founding of Gondor.
Categories: Lord of the Rings; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Poetry
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 106; Read Count: 717; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/05/2009; Published: 05/05/2009
Reviewer: Nieriel Raina (Signed)
07/29/2009
This is simply lovely. It flows very nicely and portrays the authors thoughts well in poetic form. Nicely done!
One very minor technical pickie: Middle Earth should be Middle-earth. ;) Thanks for sharing this lovely poem on the founding of Gondor!
Author's Response:
One very minor technical pickie: Middle Earth should be Middle-earth. ;) Thanks for sharing this lovely poem on the founding of Gondor!
Author's Response:
Ha! Yes, when I finally tried my hand at a story, I looked up Middle-earth. Although, I'll have to go back and double check because I don't think I used a hyphen, hm...so thanks! And thanks for reading this poem, I really appreciate the review, especially from such a talented LOTR writer! ~Gina :)
Chapter 1: Founding
Men Are Weak & A Beggar of Distinction by Alassante [All Ages]
This is two ficlets combined to make the word count. Both are about Arwen and Aragorn's marriage.
Men are Weak - Elrond's thoughts about Arwen's future with Estel.
A Beggar of Distinction - Aragorn has an interesting meeting at his wedding that leaves him speechless. For Aragorn Angst group prompt - 'Speechless' and Birthday gift for Gwynnyd
Categories: Lord of the Rings; Characters: Aragorn II, Arwen, Elrond; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1275; Read Count: 402; Completed: Yes
Updated: 07/27/2009; Published: 07/27/2009
Reviewer: Nieriel Raina (Signed)
08/04/2009
Both of these are lovely, but A Beggar of Distinction is simply one of my favorite Maglor stories. Wonderfully done, Al!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
In The Dark by Aearwen [All Ages]
A woman trapped in a world of darkness receives a visitor. Written for the Teitho Challenge: Dark Places. A MEFA 2009 nominee.
Categories: Lord of the Rings; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2702; Read Count: 374; Completed: Yes
Updated: 08/01/2009; Published: 08/01/2009
Reviewer: Nieriel Raina (Signed)
08/01/2009
I just have to say I still think this story is beautiful. Welcome to WT!!
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Thanks, NiRi! Much appreciated!
Chapter 1: In The Dark