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Member Since: 06/24/2009
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There is a new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher at Hogwarts. She is young, likeable and now, dead! Who killed her and why?

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Minerva McGonagall, Ron Weasley; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Mystery
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Language, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 9423; Read Count: 4380; Completed: Yes

Updated: 05/31/2009; Published: 05/31/2009
Reviewer: Ghostlymagic (Signed)

I like the many twists and turns, and the way that you were kept guessing until the very end. It was also a very satisfactory ending. On the whole it was fairly well written. The spelling and grammar was good.

However, on the second last line I don't agree with your use of a semi-colon, but that might just be me.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I had alot of fun writing this one.  It went to a beta reader who changes alot of my punctuation (because my grammar skills are not up to par) so I probably had a comma there in the beginning who knows.  Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review.

Chapter 6: The Truth Comes Out