Member Since: 06/24/2009
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I like the many twists and turns, and the way that you were kept guessing until the very end. It was also a very satisfactory ending. On the whole it was fairly well written. The spelling and grammar was good.
However, on the second last line I don't agree with your use of a semi-colon, but that might just be me.
Thanks, I had alot of fun writing this one. It went to a beta reader who changes alot of my punctuation (because my grammar skills are not up to par) so I probably had a comma there in the beginning who knows. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review.