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Blood of the Heart by kjpzak [Mid Teens]

7th Yr Sequel to Ancient Magic. It is now known the power of immortality resides inside Harry and Ginny. Will their combined powers be enough to protect them from the Dark Lord?



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Dark Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 264655; Read Count: 29476; Completed: Yes

Updated: 04/02/2006; Published: 05/10/2005
Reviewer: Greg (Signed)
11/21/2005
Always perfect, always new... Keep going, please...

Author's Response: LOL - thank you!



Chapter 29: The Tomb
Reviewer: Greg (Signed)
02/15/2006
Yes, Yesy and Yes!!! I look forward to the rest of the story, but Voldie sunk off, and that was a climax we all were waiting for. Keep going with the same talent.

Author's Response: lol - thank you!



Chapter 33: Overpowering Love
Harry and Ginny build a life together in a post-war era. This is the story of their lives and that of the friends and family who survived. SEQUEL TO Harry Potter and the Power of the Garuda. Read it first or you will be lost.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents Series: A Series
Word count: 44156; Read Count: 20281; Completed: Yes

Updated: 05/11/2005; Published: 05/11/2005
Reviewer: Greg (Signed)
07/04/2005
Very good, I was aware of your skills with the one-shots and did not have the pleasure of reading your novel-lenght stories before. The stories are really fluffy, but you did not forget to put some angst in it as well, as some fluffy-writer do too much sometimes. I look forward to others stories from you. Keep going, please

Author's Response: Thank you, I am glad that you liked it. This story was certainly all fluff. I was tired of the drama from it's prequil :-D But my other story is mostly drama, and I have had a few comments that a nice story with some angst and fluff would be good, so I think that will be my next story or maybe the one after that.



Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Epilogue- Where They Are Now
Different by YelloWitchGrl [Mid Teens]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
One Shot! Ginny becomes disgusted with beauty and how many girls react to it. Her reactions and interactions with Harry. That does not even sum it up... sigh. POST OOTP

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Fluff, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2966; Read Count: 553; Completed: Yes

Updated: 05/11/2005; Published: 05/11/2005
Reviewer: Greg (Signed)
05/16/2005
Hello, Nice fluff for sad days... I'm obviously not a girl, and I don't know if the "I don't feel beautiful" act is a standard, but I, for a boy, always thought that many different kind of beauties exist and that they appeal to different people. Keep going.

Author's Response: Well, the girl's I've talked with about this story all agree that they see themselves as not good enough (physically). I completely agree that there are different standards of beauty for everyone and while I don't exactly understand how it is that the man in my life thinks I'm beautiful, I'm willing to go along with him and just trust that he does... and also realize that I don't have to understand it. BUT enough on me, thanks for the review and I'll keep going with the one-shots. :-)



Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Different
Say Yes by YelloWitchGrl [Mid Teens]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
One Shot! Ginny asks Harry a question and she hopes he'll say yes. H/G

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff, General
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1809; Read Count: 671; Completed: Yes

Updated: 05/11/2005; Published: 05/11/2005
Reviewer: Greg (Signed)
05/13/2005
I think the rythm and the characters are all right, but I regret slightly a little more combative Ginny, since she seems to know that he is in love with her...

Author's Response: Okay, if I'm reading you right then you didn't want Ginny fighting because she already knew that Harry loved her? Okay, well I'm going to go on that and you can tell me if I'm wrong. I guess I see the two things as seperate. Ginny is not happy with Harry for denying his feelings and her brother did humiliate her. I can't see her letting that go but that is just me :-) Anyway, hopefully you'll check back and read this and can let me know if I didn't understand what you were saying. Thanks!



Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Say Yes
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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: None
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No

Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: Greg (Signed)
05/16/2005
Well written but a little sad for my tastes. With the power of a wizard, you could think that it is possible to keep contact very often and to avoid long missions like this.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, Greg. Hopefully when I get the second part done it will be more cheerful ;)



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Never Alone by YelloWitchGrl [Young Teens]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
One-Shot! What is it to make a promise to someone? What can that promise mean? It's a small story of how two people come together.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Fluff, General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 4651; Read Count: 592; Completed: Yes

Updated: 05/12/2005; Published: 05/12/2005
Reviewer: Greg (Signed)
05/13/2005
I have mixed opinion about this one. Harry is a bit too pratish and at some point the action was a bit forward and back, with no real sense of where we were heading. But I found the style at the end very smooth and the story is getting better and better when the action goes. Keep going.

Author's Response: *sigh* Well, this one was a struggle for me. I am working on improving my writing style but I have to agree that I liked the ending best. Thanks for the review!



Chapter 1: Never Alone
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Ginny loves Harry. Harry loves Ginny. She won’t admit it. He’s gonna fight like hell for her. Why is she pushing him away so hard? What is she keeping from him? What will happens when he finds out? How will he save her?

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Character Study
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations, Strong Language
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 7888; Read Count: 771; Completed: No

Updated: 08/16/2005; Published: 05/18/2005
Reviewer: Greg (Signed)
05/30/2005
I'm not that convinced by the characters feelings... Perhaps I'm too influenced by a "fair Harry" perfect character, but somehow I doubt he would go find Cho while having feelings for Ginny. The style is Ok and the description are smooth, but I don't like that much the interaction between H, G and Cho


Chapter 2: Get To Me
Scars by destin4fl [Mid Teens]
starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]

Harry Potter has had his whole life defined by his scar, it even has defined his future. But what if he hadn't been so lucky to walk away with what amounts to a small scratch?



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU)
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 9988; Read Count: 2706; Completed: No

Updated: 09/05/2005; Published: 05/18/2005
Reviewer: Greg (Signed)
05/30/2005
The setting seems promising, and I can't wait to see where all this can lead... I hope that somehow Harry will lose a bit of his physical freakiness (not that I find quite right some views of Harry as a Adonis). I am pretty sure that Ginny will be able to see through the disgrace to realize that he is a kind, brave and nice people.


Chapter 1: Something is Different
All For One by YelloWitchGrl [Young Teens]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
One Shot! Follows 11 years after my story Demons in the Dreams although you don't have to read that first to enjoy this one. It is just a fluffy shot at family life for Harry and Ginny.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Humor
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff, General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: Demons In The Dreams Series
Word count: 3609; Read Count: 513; Completed: Yes

Updated: 05/27/2005; Published: 05/27/2005
Reviewer: Greg (Signed)
05/30/2005
Very nice short piece of fluff. Please do some other ones.

Author's Response: Thank you! It is my goal to write at least one more before HBP so we'll see how that goes.



Chapter 1: Chapter 1: All For One