Penname: laceymoibella [Contact]
Real name: Lacey
Member Since: 02/27/2009
Membership status: Member



Gender: female


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Year 6 AU. H/G; R/Hr. Sirius Black is dead, Lord Voldemort failed to learn the entirety of the Prophecy of his defeat, Dolores Umbridge was chased from Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and Harry Potter departed once again for 4 Privet Drive. But just because school has ended for summer doesn't mean the war has.

Harry and Ginny must deal with unforseen consequences of the Chamber of Secrets while Fudge plots to control the Boy Who Lived and break the Order of the Phoenix. Fudge's machinations leave Harry cut off from the wizarding world and at the mercy of an out-of-control Vernon Dursley.

And while the wizarding world fights over the fate of the Boy Who Lived, Voldemort awakes forbidden, forgotten Lore to wage his war on the wizarding world.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Mild Language, Sexual Situations, Strong Violence
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 30076; Read Count: 643; Completed: No

Updated: 08/14/2009; Published: 01/14/2009
Reviewer: laceymoibella (Signed)
08/14/2009

I thought you wrote Draco brilliantly. I can't wait to see where you are going with his storyline.

~Lacey

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you continue to read!  I think Draco's potential lies not in redemption or as a punching bag...but as a villain worthy of a hero. 




Chapter 8: CH6: No Failure
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This story takes place after HBP and before DH.  Harry broke up with Ginny, but he can't seem to go on without her.  What will he do when he finds her alone?

Inspired by the song "Then Came the Night" by Trace Adkins.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction, Songfic
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 733; Read Count: 614; Completed: Yes

Updated: 05/26/2009; Published: 05/25/2009
Reviewer: laceymoibella (Signed)
06/30/2009

You did a great job with a missing moment between Harry & Ginny. You can feel his tension and her misery. Nice story!

~Lacey



Author's Response:

Thank you for those comments.  I'm glad those things came across.  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!




Chapter 1: Chapter 1
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Jasper's recounting of the first year he spent with Alice as they search for the Cullen family.



Categories: Twilight; Characters: Alice Cullen, Japer Whitlock; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Character Study, Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Mild Violence
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 728; Read Count: 471; Completed: Yes

Updated: 05/26/2009; Published: 05/25/2009
Reviewer: laceymoibella (Signed)
06/26/2009

Marvelous story. I love reading Jasper's perspective about his transformation upon meeting Alice. He is an intriguing character and you portray him wonderfully.

 

~Lacey




Chapter 1: Chapter 1
The Reason by KrysCullen [All Ages]
[Reviews - 2]
Harry knows that keeping his distance from Ginny is safest for her... but his heart can't handle it anymore. Song is by Hoobastank

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), Romance, Songfic
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1507; Read Count: 628; Completed: Yes

Updated: 06/01/2009; Published: 06/01/2009
Reviewer: laceymoibella (Signed)
08/05/2009

Very moving. You excelled in bringing across what both were feeling.

 

~Lacey



Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I tried to get their emotions right, I know it would be an intense moment for both of them.



Chapter 1: The Reason
Home Again by Gmariam [All Ages]
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Written for the One-Hour Challenge, this short story follows Samwise Gamgee as he says farewell to Frodo at the Grey Havens.



Categories: Lord of the Rings; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: One-Hour Challenge
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1458; Read Count: 809; Completed: Yes

Updated: 06/23/2009; Published: 06/23/2009
Reviewer: laceymoibella (Signed)
07/29/2009

I have not read the series but you do a brillaint job bringing this to life. Your descriptiveness is outstanding. It allowed me to envision that I was there experiencing this along with Sam.

I think this is one of your best pieces yet, Gina.

~Lacey



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Lacey!  I don't know if it's one of my best pieces - have you read some of the other LOTR stories going up here? Wow!! - but I really appreciate you reading this story and leaving such a nice review! I highly recommend reading the books, they are much better, lol! Thanks again! ~Gina :)




Chapter 1: Home Again
Soul Mate by Keeri [All Ages]
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What was it like for Renesmee during her first hour of life? Becoming someone's soulmate at birth can cause problems for everyone...



Categories: Twilight; Characters: Alice Cullen, Edward Cullen, Jacob Black, Renesmee Cullen, Rosalie Hale; Archive Challenge: One-Hour Challenge
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama, Fluff
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1083; Read Count: 497; Completed: Yes

Updated: 06/27/2009; Published: 06/27/2009
Reviewer: laceymoibella (Signed)
06/28/2009

You have a written a unique story from ReneeEsme's pov that fills in a missing moment well. Nice job!

~Lacey




Chapter 1: Chapter 1

An unlikely meeting in a London coffee shop.  Originally written for amor_remanet's prompt at rarepair_shorts Wishlist Challenge.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: Other Canon Character, Pansy Parkinson; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction, Post-Canon, Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1449; Read Count: 29; Completed: Yes

Updated: 06/29/2009; Published: 06/28/2009
Reviewer: laceymoibella (Signed)
06/30/2009

It was nice to see a different side of Pansy. She has always been painted black and it was refreshing how you wrote her.

~Lacey



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I try to see her (and others) as three-dimensional characters, so I'm glad that it showed.




Chapter 1: Pride, Prejudice and the Kitchen Sink
Her Sunshine by KrysCullen [All Ages]
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Hannah overhears something that she wished she hadn't.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: Fred Weasley, George Weasley, Hannah Abbott; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction, Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama, Fluff
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1059; Read Count: 495; Completed: Yes

Updated: 07/24/2009; Published: 07/24/2009
Reviewer: laceymoibella (Signed)
07/25/2009

This was a terrific story. This is a side of both characters that is not demonstrated often.

 

~Lacey



Author's Response: Thank you! I absolutely love these character for so many reasons. I'm sure that George has a soft, romantic side that he prefers to keep tucked away (he can't ruin his reputation can he?) and Hannah in my mind has inner strength that she doesn't get the chance to show.



Chapter 1: Her Sunshine

There was a reason why Hermione preferred to think everything through before acting. Spontaneity just gets you into all kinds of trouble. Same goes for Slytherins. (Post-DH, EWE)



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: Draco Malfoy, Hermione Granger; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Post-Canon
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 5756; Read Count: 115; Completed: Yes

Updated: 08/12/2009; Published: 08/12/2009
Reviewer: laceymoibella (Signed)
08/26/2009

Simply brilliant ending! Your ability to keep the characters canon and yet the plot AU, was astounding. This is by far one of the best D/Hr fics I have ever read. Keep up the wonderful writing.

~Lacey



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I tried hard to keep everyone as much in character as possible.




Chapter 1: Spontaneous Desires
Bottoms Up by Kalina_blue [Mid Teens]
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Hermione and Draco have to serve detention with Snape, but they are not the only ones. Beware of the Hufflepuffs.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: Draco Malfoy, Hermione Granger; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Humor
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 3187; Read Count: 458; Completed: Yes

Updated: 08/15/2009; Published: 08/15/2009
Reviewer: laceymoibella (Signed)
08/23/2009

This was a great story. I loved how the flawed potion is what made Draco and Hermione react the way they did. Brilliant. You did a wonderful job in keeping them, along with Snape, canon. I enjoyed the thoughts Snape was having about the whole situation.

~Lacey



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.




Chapter 1: Bottoms Up