Penname: butter_beer_drinker [Contact]
Real name: Kristy
Member Since: 02/20/2009
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I am a mom with 3 kids and have recently opened a small sandwich shop with my own mom.  I am also a Mod on the forums but I am very easy going and love to chat. I love Draco, not sure why but I do.  I was so TEAM JACOB and was seriously bummed about the way Twilight ended.  I am rooting for Eragon and Arya but fear that is a tragic love story and I must say that Orlando Bloom is by far the HOTTEST elf I have ever seen! I have a few one shots and 2 chaptered fics along with 2 WIP's. 

Gender: female

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From White to Black by Opifex [Mid Teens]
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The true history of Galbatorix. Where did he come from? What shaped him into the man he would become? Did he ever truly deserve to be the most hated man in Alagaesia?

The fic that made me famous, first posted years ago at Shurtugal Fan Fiction. This is the fic that made readers everywhere start to wonder - who should they really be rooting for?

Categories: Inheritance; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Pre-Canon
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: Dark Fiction
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 191657; Read Count: 30189; Completed: Yes

Updated: 04/11/2009; Published: 01/14/2009
Reviewer: butter_beer_drinker (Signed)

I really liked this one, I could feel them flying through the air I felt like I was right there with them. Great job.

Chapter 8: Nightmares and Fairths
Reviewer: butter_beer_drinker (Signed)

I liked your version of the blood oath celebration and how you made him an outcast instead of excelling at everything.  While his farith was good it angered everyone who saw it.  I also liked how Flell and Galbatorix finally came together.

Chapter 10: The Blood-Oath Celebration
Reviewer: butter_beer_drinker (Signed)

oh no this is the same as the last chapter


Chapter 11: The Books
Reviewer: butter_beer_drinker (Signed)

I am really impressed so far with this story, I can't wait to move onto the next chapter.  I am however concerned with the fact that there are only 2 chapters and your opening remarks stated that the story was lengthy can complete.  I hope you will continue adding the chapters.

Chapter 1: Dark Beginnings
Reviewer: butter_beer_drinker (Signed)

ANGELA!!!! I love Angela and Im glad you included the old brod.  I really enjoy this story your imagination is on track with the original author and this story could easily be part of the series.  I really hope you finish uploading this.

Chapter 2: Galbatorix
Reviewer: butter_beer_drinker (Signed)

What a vivid imagination you have.  The trials were all very well laid out and I like how you didn't allow Galbatorix to excell at everything.  Your description of the dragons is wonderful and I could see both of them clearly in my mind.  The only small change I would make would be to show the passing of time a little better. At the rate you have written it, it appears the trials lasted about 20 minutes.  You might mention the changing of the shadows on the ground or the contestants growing weary from lack of food, stretch it out so that it shows they were ther all day and exhausted from their efforts.

Chapter 3: The Trials
Reviewer: butter_beer_drinker (Signed)

Good job with the details and the ceremony.  I did think the eggs hatched a bit to quickly though but since Eragon didn't sit down with his like this then maybe that is why Saphira took longer to hatch.

Chapter 4: The Egg-Guardian
Reviewer: butter_beer_drinker (Signed)

I loved the last part where they are exploring each others memories, it was beautiful and touching.

Chapter 5: Laela
Reviewer: butter_beer_drinker (Signed)

your writing skills are so good, everyting you write could esily fit into the actualy books.  I love the banter between Laela and Galbatorix they seem like a perfect match.


Chapter 6: Training
Reviewer: butter_beer_drinker (Signed)

What a great idea you had, the two of them being so merged that they became one. It was and exhilerating chapter.

Chapter 7: Through a Dragon's Eyes