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Ten years after Harry's death, Ron and Hermione are finally able to see by the light he left them.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 4723; Read Count: 639; Completed: Yes

Updated: 01/14/2006; Published: 01/14/2006
Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
04/08/2009

Grief and anger often go hand in hand - it's such a relief when that one moment strikes when you realize that life just might really be okay again.

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I was toying with the idea of something going unspoken between two married people for ten years...and decided it was very possible for that to happen.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.




Chapter 1: One Shot
Cry On My Shoulder by Strider [Mid Teens]
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The curse on the last Horcrux has left Harry, Hermione, and Ron badly wounded. As each of them sacrifices for the others, they learn just how strong they are together.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Foreign Language, Post-Canon
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, General
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 5421; Read Count: 745; Completed: Yes

Updated: 03/07/2006; Published: 03/07/2006
Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
04/08/2009

The tension, fear and pain build from beginning to end.  It was lovely to see if not a happy ending, then at least a moment of peace for all three of them.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I'm really glad those things came through.  I really appreciate the review!




Chapter 1: One Shot
Success by Strider [All Ages]
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Percy's life is exactly the way he wants it.  He's a success.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Character Study
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2903; Read Count: 874; Completed: Yes

Updated: 04/02/2007; Published: 04/01/2007
Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
04/08/2009

Poor Percy!  Success can be so very lonely.  You've captured his character beautifully, and his reaction to Charlie being Penelope's date was spot on. 

I hope we'll be seeing more of you back here at WT as this was simply outstanding.

~ Julie (WT Mod Squad)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Julie!  I do have a few other things I might post.... Thanks for reviewing!




Chapter 1: One Shot
From White to Black by Opifex [Mid Teens]
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The true history of Galbatorix. Where did he come from? What shaped him into the man he would become? Did he ever truly deserve to be the most hated man in Alagaesia?

The fic that made me famous, first posted years ago at Shurtugal Fan Fiction. This is the fic that made readers everywhere start to wonder - who should they really be rooting for?



Categories: Inheritance; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Pre-Canon
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: Dark Fiction
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 191657; Read Count: 30189; Completed: Yes

Updated: 04/11/2009; Published: 01/14/2009
Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
04/08/2009

Such a refreshing read!  You've done a great job of drawing the reader in to the world you're writing about.




Chapter 3: The Trials
Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
04/16/2009

It's so very satisfying to see Galbatorix find the place he's been looking for.  But all good things come to an end, don't they?

The swing from one emotion to another is beautifully done.




Chapter 20: Among the Dark Elves
Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
04/16/2009

There's a gritty, physical feeling to this chapter.  The interaction between Vrael and Galbatorix during the ceremony is tense and exhilirating.




Chapter 14: Induction
Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
04/16/2009

Uh, oh.  Trouble's brewing!  This chapter, for me, really gives depth to the relationship between Laela and Galbatorix - gives you a sense of their psychological and physical connection.

Outstanding!




Chapter 15: White Violence
Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
04/16/2009

Utterly gut wrenching and beautifully executed (no pun intended).

Wow!




Chapter 22: Dead and Gone
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This follows Ernie Macmillan and Susan Bones through their 7th year at Hogwarts.  It follows the timeline and includes spoilers for thanfiction's Dumbledore's Army and the Year of Darkness series.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: Ernie Macmillan, Susan Bones; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance, The Underground (Adults Only)
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Book Seven Spoilers, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Strong Language, Strong Violence
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 57048; Read Count: 168; Completed: No

Updated: 07/01/2009; Published: 03/11/2009
Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
03/11/2009

I'm so glad you decided to submit this to WT!  I like the way you've begun to develop characters that we haven't seen as much of in canon and made them human.  I especially enjoyed the way you've portrayed Ernie and Neville not just as their stereotyped characters from the books.


Well done! 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad you recommended this site.  I really like Neville - I like how he's grown up through the books.  As for Ernie, I really fell in love with the Ernie portrayed in thanfiction's work, and adopted him and have tried to flesh out his and Susan's story in more detail.  I hope people enjoy them.  Thanks for your help as well on the advice for uploading future chapters and other stories.  I'm looking forward to getting more up here soon.




Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Return to Hogwarts

This is the first book in the Alexandra Quick series.

The war against Voldemort never reached America, but American wizarding society has its own problems. For eleven-year-old Alexandra Quick, learning she's a witch will only be the first of many surprises. This story is canon-compliant with the Harry Potter universe, but the characters and settings are all original. I've put a lot of work into envisioning a world as detailed as the original series; I hope you enjoy it.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: Original Character; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 160648; Read Count: 17753; Completed: Yes

Updated: 05/06/2009; Published: 03/21/2009
Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
04/03/2009

Your description of Alexandra's essay was incredibly funny!  Overall, this was  a delightful chapter to read, and I found myself laughing in more than one place.

Outstanding job!




Chapter 10: Chicken