Penname: captburke [Contact]
Real name: Lin
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What if the fates that let Harry's parents live the night he got his scar, also gave him a younger sister and let him befriend Ron Weasley earlier? What would be different?



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 223354; Read Count: 118190; Completed: Yes

Updated: 12/26/2006; Published: 08/23/2005
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/18/2009

Yes! Harry and Ginny are most definitely going to be a force to reckon with, even before they're of age. I'm also betting Harry gets grounded, again.




Chapter 37: Once more to the rescue
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/18/2009

You have such a great story. Your plotline is well thought out. Great deviation from the HP series, different prospectives and viewpoints, but I'm fairly certain the outcome will be the same.




Chapter 38: Chapter 37: Revealing the Bond
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/18/2009

I need to get a new thesaurus, I'm running out of words to express how much I'm enjoying this, and how well it's written




Chapter 39: Chapter 38: A Potter's Promise
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/18/2009

Perfect. Malfoy deserves whatever the Marauders, New and Original, can deliver. And I'm betting Ti is going to have a mother in the not to distant future.

Hmmmnnn, is Snape going to end up being one of the bad guys in this story? I will admit I always believed he was one of the good guys in the HP series. I didn't necessarily like him a lot of the time, but I was convinced he was ultimately one of the good guys.




Chapter 40: The end of another school year
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/18/2009

Marvelous, spectacular, wonderful, amazing, fantastic, splendiforus, awesome.




Chapter 41: Back home for the summer
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/18/2009

I'm almost afraid to think how much better this is going to get.  




Chapter 42: Summer troubles
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/18/2009

Knew I was right to be afraid. Awesome just doesn't begin to cover this story.




Chapter 43: Prophecies and Anger Management
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/18/2009

A little more intensity in this chapter. I like your version of where the Dark Mark appeared. Now I'm wondering if Barty Jr is going to make an appearance, and if that is how Harry's name will get into the Goblet, 'cause I'm guessing that is where you're heading. I could be wrong.




Chapter 44: The World Cup and Voldemort's first moves
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/18/2009

Is this the real Mad Eye? Or is our old friend Barty Jr back? Someone has to put Harry's name in the Goblet. I'm still not sure if Snape is a good guy or bad guy in this story.

Wonder what Draco is up to acknowledging his ex-brother?




Chapter 45: Once more at Hogwarts
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/18/2009

I'm now guessing it may have been Barty Sr who put Harry's name in the Goblet. I like the way you had Rose have the premonition, and only having one Hogwarts Champion is another great idea. A different Headmaster at Durmstrang is another plus.

I really do love seeing Harry's story played out with parents, siblings, friends he's had all his life, the new characters, his godfather and Remus. I can't wait to finish this and start the sequel. I have a hunch about the Green Lord and White Ram. Nevill and Ti




Chapter 46: The Choosing of the Champions