Real name: Lin
Member Since: 02/01/2009
Membership status: Member
I am a reader, not a writer
What if the fates that let Harry's parents live the night he got his scar, also gave him a younger sister and let him befriend Ron Weasley earlier? What would be different?
Yes! Harry and Ginny are most definitely going to be a force to reckon with, even before they're of age. I'm also betting Harry gets grounded, again.
You have such a great story. Your plotline is well thought out. Great deviation from the HP series, different prospectives and viewpoints, but I'm fairly certain the outcome will be the same.
I need to get a new thesaurus, I'm running out of words to express how much I'm enjoying this, and how well it's written
Perfect. Malfoy deserves whatever the Marauders, New and Original, can deliver. And I'm betting Ti is going to have a mother in the not to distant future.
Hmmmnnn, is Snape going to end up being one of the bad guys in this story? I will admit I always believed he was one of the good guys in the HP series. I didn't necessarily like him a lot of the time, but I was convinced he was ultimately one of the good guys.
Marvelous, spectacular, wonderful, amazing, fantastic, splendiforus, awesome.
I'm almost afraid to think how much better this is going to get.
Knew I was right to be afraid. Awesome just doesn't begin to cover this story.
A little more intensity in this chapter. I like your version of where the Dark Mark appeared. Now I'm wondering if Barty Jr is going to make an appearance, and if that is how Harry's name will get into the Goblet, 'cause I'm guessing that is where you're heading. I could be wrong.
Is this the real Mad Eye? Or is our old friend Barty Jr back? Someone has to put Harry's name in the Goblet. I'm still not sure if Snape is a good guy or bad guy in this story.
Wonder what Draco is up to acknowledging his ex-brother?
I'm now guessing it may have been Barty Sr who put Harry's name in the Goblet. I like the way you had Rose have the premonition, and only having one Hogwarts Champion is another great idea. A different Headmaster at Durmstrang is another plus.
I really do love seeing Harry's story played out with parents, siblings, friends he's had all his life, the new characters, his godfather and Remus. I can't wait to finish this and start the sequel. I have a hunch about the Green Lord and White Ram. Nevill and Ti