Penname: captburke [Contact]
Real name: Lin
Member Since: 02/01/2009
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What if the fates that let Harry's parents live the night he got his scar, also gave him a younger sister and let him befriend Ron Weasley earlier? What would be different?



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 223354; Read Count: 118184; Completed: Yes

Updated: 12/26/2006; Published: 08/23/2005
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/17/2009

Love the way you're writing this. AU's can be great, just okay, or really suck. This is a great one.




Chapter 17: To the rescue
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/17/2009

I think it's absolutely wonderful seeing what life might be like with Harry having his real family around him. Growing up in and knowing about the world he belongs to but still essentially the Harry we know and love from the HP series.




Chapter 18: After the Chamber
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/17/2009

I really, really want to go live in this world.




Chapter 19: End of another schoolyear
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/17/2009

Not only does Neville get parents, he gets a sister, good show. I do believe Harry and Ginny are showing signs that they're destined for each other. Only seems right to me. And another sibling for Harry and Rose? Definitely an entirely new story.




Chapter 20: Summer training and a surprise announcement
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/17/2009

Another new twist. I'm liking this more with every chapter.




Chapter 21: Start of term
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/17/2009

I am loving this! Your characters are wonderful, very real, very well written.




Chapter 22: Befriending a Malfoy
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/17/2009

More twists. This is just getting to be more fun by the minute. I can't say enough good things about the way you've developed the characters, written the storyline, everything.




Chapter 23: Strange first lessons and Hermione's birthday surprise
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/17/2009

I still want to be Sirius when I grow up. Amazing story. It just keeps getting better.




Chapter 24: When Sirius meets Ti
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/17/2009

The Marauders have very definitely passed on their legacy to the New Marauders. I would so like to be a Hogwarts student during the reign of either group.




Chapter 25: Quidditch and Halloween
Reviewer: captburke (Signed)
02/17/2009

I can only pray I know the answer the Sorting Hat will give. Lucius Malfoy is a total ass and should not be allowed to have a great son like Ti




Chapter 26: A couple of Sirius visits