Penname: cb11 [Contact]
Real name: Jake
Member Since: 01/11/2009
Membership status: Member

I'm a newbie if you will to these types of sites.  I got into fanfiction only a few short months ago. 

I am currently a full time student pursuing a bachelor's degree in mechanical engineering.



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Reign O'er Me by cts [Mid Teens]
FeatureA sixth year fic that explores what might happen if Harry moves past the angst and starts to put his life together and has a few things break his way for a change.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 371120; Read Count: 124368; Completed: No

Updated: 03/11/2011; Published: 12/04/2004
Reviewer: cb11 (Signed)
01/23/2009

Excellent story so far, seems to finally be ramping into the war.  Can't wait to see it continued!




Chapter 38: Chapter 37 - Pictures of Lily

Year 6 AU. H/G; R/Hr. Sirius Black is dead, Lord Voldemort failed to learn the entirety of the Prophecy of his defeat, Dolores Umbridge was chased from Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and Harry Potter departed once again for 4 Privet Drive. But just because school has ended for summer doesn't mean the war has.

Harry and Ginny must deal with unforseen consequences of the Chamber of Secrets while Fudge plots to control the Boy Who Lived and break the Order of the Phoenix. Fudge's machinations leave Harry cut off from the wizarding world and at the mercy of an out-of-control Vernon Dursley.

And while the wizarding world fights over the fate of the Boy Who Lived, Voldemort awakes forbidden, forgotten Lore to wage his war on the wizarding world.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Mild Language, Sexual Situations, Strong Violence
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 30076; Read Count: 643; Completed: No

Updated: 08/14/2009; Published: 01/14/2009
Reviewer: cb11 (Signed)
01/15/2009

Excellent beginning to a story.  You make it sound like this is posted somewhere else, but i haven't read any before so i will give my fresh opinion:

You start of great, leaving the reader already trying to figure something out within the first few paragraphs.  You are also leading us along with anticipation about something, but not quite enough info to figure it out.  Since this is Harry/Ginny ship, i can guess where this might be going, but im not really sure.

Either way, I look forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

I hope I'm not too predictable!

Thank you very much for the review - and I hope you continue to enjoy the story.




Chapter 1: Prologue: Sibling Rivalry
Reviewer: cb11 (Signed)
01/19/2009

Wierd twist, can't wait to see where this goes.  Toad Cliffy FTW



Author's Response:

I never really mean to leave cliffhangers, but I always seem to!  I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you continue to enjoy it!




Chapter 2: CH 1: Return to Privet Drive
Reviewer: cb11 (Signed)
01/26/2009

Wow, i feel bad for Harry.  I mean, you get stuck somewhere you definately didn't want to be to begin with, and now you got your dickhead uncle wiht a "free hand". 

Keep it up man i want to see where this goes.



Author's Response:

It goes some pretty dark places, some of it.  Vernon is not afraid to use his free hand...and Harry's pretty much stuck. 




Chapter 3: CH 2: Reparations and Retribution

This is the first book in the Alexandra Quick series.

The war against Voldemort never reached America, but American wizarding society has its own problems. For eleven-year-old Alexandra Quick, learning she's a witch will only be the first of many surprises. This story is canon-compliant with the Harry Potter universe, but the characters and settings are all original. I've put a lot of work into envisioning a world as detailed as the original series; I hope you enjoy it.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: Original Character; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 160648; Read Count: 17756; Completed: Yes

Updated: 05/06/2009; Published: 03/21/2009
Reviewer: cb11 (Signed)
05/10/2009

This is just an absolutly wonderful story.  You develop you characters excellently and do an excellent job creating a plot you can say is entirely your own.  I loved this story so much I had to continue to read the second year on one of the other sites.

Thank you for putting your time into writing this wonderful story, and I can't wait to read more.




Chapter 29: The Raven

It was a brand new day in a brand new world, and Harry Potter, just like the rest of the Wizarding World, didn't know how to begin living life again. This, above all, is his story. A story of rebuilding. H/G, R/Hr.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: Book Seven Spoilers, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 10373; Read Count: 3167; Completed: No

Updated: 07/10/2009; Published: 04/09/2009
Reviewer: cb11 (Signed)
05/02/2009

Good start to a post-war story.  Can't wait to see more!




Chapter 3: Douleur