Penname: Wolfs_Scream [Contact]
Real name: David Wolfskill
Member Since: 08/18/2005
Membership status: Member

Not creative enough to be an author; I can help with proofreading and the like, though. The Web site above has nothing about Harry Potter. Buried in some pages on the site you might find hints as to the origin of the penname, but that's about the extent of the relevance.

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What if the fates that let Harry's parents live the night he got his scar, also gave him a younger sister and let him befriend Ron Weasley earlier? What would be different?

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 223354; Read Count: 118235; Completed: Yes

Updated: 12/26/2006; Published: 08/23/2005
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream (Signed)
Nice to see Harry & Ginny having a bit of quiet time together.
Looks as if the Bond will take some getting used to.  :-}

Curious that Harry wants to wait before talking to Dumbledore
about what Trelawney said, given that she specifically said
"It will happen tonight."

Re: previous chapter's comments & response:  you may find the
"Harry Potter Lexicon"
(<>) useful.  And given
that Ginny doesn't especially care for her formal given name,
maybe it would be best to reserve its use for formal occasions.
Of course, it's your story.  :-)

Chapter 32: First Valentine's Day together
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream (Signed)
Heh.  Thanks for spelling her name correctly.  :-}

Y'know, given that Lily's pregnant, Dumbledore could be exposed
to certain activities usually kept private if he keeps up the
practice of poking his head into other folks' master

Interesting adjustments of sequences of events & participants
therein.  :-)

Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I\'m ashamed to say that I wasn\'t aware it was Ginevra and not Ginerva until another reviewer pointed it out to me.

Chapter 33: A Nightmare that isn't
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream (Signed)
Ha!  I almost guessed the identity of the woman.  :-)  [I
thought she would have been Amelia Susan Bones.  Not sure who
Amanda is....

Story's coming along quite nicely, though.

Author's Response:

Heh, sorry, that was a mistype. It should be Amelia Bones. Even my beta didn\'t notice that.

Chapter 34: A Conversation with Rose and Hermione
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream (Signed)
Very nice; I rather enjoyed the mental communications (in their various forms).  [But then, I wasn't a recipient of the mental yelling....  :-}]

Author's Response:

Heh, heh, I\'m glad I\'m not, also. Thanks again for your review.

Chapter 35: Bad news
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream (Signed)

Excellent, overall.

Snape's behavior seemed a bit odd -- and I could see reasons for him scratching his *left* forearm....

 Not quite sure what "Harry shook his head at the stupidity of the Ministry's head." means.

 I laughed at the image of Ginny getting "an eyeful" and being startled.  I reckon she can be relieved that the situations weren't reversed.:-)

 It was also amusing reading of James suggesting that Harry could surprise Ginny.  Yes, I realize he doesn't know about the Bond.  Still....  :-}



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Sorry about those two mistakes. I\'m galde you like those parts. The next chapter is coming.

Chapter 36: Chapter 35: A visit to St. Mungo's
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream (Signed)

Heh -- that was fun!  So we see -- not sure how soon Harry, Ginny, and the rest will notice -- that at this stage of their Bonding, physical contact enhances Harry & Ginny's magical power, eh?

 I did notice a couple of typos; not sure how you want that mentioned (if at all).

But the story's great!  :-) 

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I do appreciate anyone pointing out a typo so I can either fix it or explain it.

Chapter 37: Once more to the rescue
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream (Signed)
Ah, very nice.  Now Harry & Ginny should be able to be a little more relaxed (about their growing Bond), at least within family.  Hmmm... Lily doesn't know yet, though, what with the twins.  I suppose James will let her know; her reaction should be ... interesting....  :-}

Chapter 38: Chapter 37: Revealing the Bond
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream (Signed)
Well done -- especially Harry's dsappointment re: Wormtail's fate & Ginny's perceptiveness.  Should be interesting to see what happens as Harry & Ginny explore their Bond.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. They\'ll soon go into that.

Chapter 39: Chapter 38: A Potter's Promise
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream (Signed)

His friends' rather concrete demonstration of their friendship will undoubtedly have a profound positive effect on Ti.  Wonder if Hermione's brother will be magical?  And how Lily will cope with the twins??!?

The pranks were fairly spectacular. though transforming Draco into a large-breasted woman was, perhaps, a bit "over the top" (no pun intended).  :-}

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. We\'ll see about Hermione\'s brother.

Chapter 40: The end of another school year
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream (Signed)

Excellent -- and a rather amusing little nod to Jeconais, it seems.


Chapter 53: The Second Task