Penname: Muus [Contact]
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Member Since: 08/10/2005
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I'm a 21 year old guy from Germany and normally study math at my local University, but have been into HP fanfiction since 2004 now. I originally started writing fanfiction myself with the hope of writing spectecular action scenes and Quidditch matches, but have written more than 20k words in various stories (of which I published only one yet, with the WT Challenge 2 soon to come) up till now and not one action or Quiddirch scene ... quite sad really ...

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Reviews by Muus
A chance meeting in a dark room. There are questions that need to be answered.

*Double Shot-Complete*

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 4212; Read Count: 1668; Completed: Yes

Updated: 08/28/2005; Published: 08/24/2005
Reviewer: Muus (Signed)
A lovely story really. Lots of real seeming emotions, brilliantly written ... I am sadly at a loss for criticism.

Chapter 2: Part Two
After a dementor attack in Hogsmeade, Harry offers Ginny some private lessons.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 28187; Read Count: 6001; Completed: Yes

Updated: 08/30/2005; Published: 08/25/2005
Reviewer: Muus (Signed)
A very nice story overall. I especially liked all of the Harry/Ginny interactions so fay very much. Now enough with the praise onto things you could have done better in my opinion ;) In Chapter 3 you have Luna talking a bit too much for my taste. The only person allowed to talk that long is Dumbledore and to a far lesser extend Hermione. That talking sense into Harry didn't really fit her character in my opinion, she is more the person to do that in few, but very true words, not a long rant. Now on to Chapter 5. I see that you go far away from what has been told about magic in canon, to show Harry as more powerful ... well I'm not a big fan of Superpower-Harry, but that is a personal opinion that doesn't matter here. I didn't really mind it in this case, but I would have liked more of Ginny's thoughts on it, seeing as the main idea behind the story was getting Harry and Ginny together. And you had a few smaller mistakes in you theory: Crucio has a red light not a green one, and the only Unforgiveable that is unblockable it the Killing Curse, the fake Moody said it explicidly about it because it is so special. But because the shield is so easy it'd still be special even if the Cruciactus Curse was blockable before by a very complex charm most likely, so no harm done. And you should make your describtion of why Harry's Patronus killed the Dementors in Chapter 2 to fit the one you introduce here. Back then you said that it was only the love Harry felt, but now it is more hope as the important part. So that's it for now. I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Muus

Chapter 5: Demonstrations