Penname: Buttamellow [Contact]
Real name: Leslie
Member Since: 08/10/2005
Membership status: Member

Let's see. I'm a 25-year old workaholic who spends her days running a retail store and dealing with interesting customers. I enjoy reading, writing, sleeping and spending time with my friends and family.


My guilty pleasures consist of RPG, fanfiction and romance novels (the non-trashy kind of course!). Oh and Diet Dr. Pepper. I really love a good Diet Dr. Pepper.


"Sunshine, daisies, butter mellow, turn this stupid, fat rat yellow!"



Beta-reader: Yes
Gender: female


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Reviews by Buttamellow
Looking Back by GloryForEver [All Ages]
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Remus and Tonks wonder why.


Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 154; Read Count: 413; Completed: Yes

Updated: 02/04/2007; Published: 02/04/2007
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
08/30/2007
Another amazing drabble!  I love your work.  Great job!


Chapter 1: Looking Back
Warfare by GloryForEver [All Ages]
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Remus's biggest detractor is none other than himself.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 122; Read Count: 377; Completed: Yes

Updated: 02/04/2007; Published: 02/04/2007
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
08/30/2007
I love how you capture the moment in so few words.  Great job!


Chapter 1: Warfare
Saved by GloryForEver [All Ages]
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Remus has a small but dire realization.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 112; Read Count: 371; Completed: Yes

Updated: 02/04/2007; Published: 02/04/2007
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
08/29/2007
This was an amazing drabble.  I love how you captured the moment in so little words.  Fabulous job!


Chapter 1: Saved
After Apocalypse by Cyborg [Young Teens]
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Benjamin Peter was ejected from his life as an orphan and is forced to live on his own. Experience his emotional journey as he wanders the earth discovering the secrets of his past and avoiding the dangers that await him there.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), Dark Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Mystery
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 23915; Read Count: 6565; Completed: No

Updated: 01/18/2009; Published: 02/08/2007
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
04/24/2007
A wonderful beginning to a story. I love your characterization.  You bring your OCs to life and make them seem so believable.  I also enjoy how you took the HP universe and 'made it your own'.  Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm not very happy with the length of it, and it may go under major revision if I have time in the future.



Chapter 1: Exile
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
04/24/2007
Another great chapter.  A little bit of background on Ben.  I also enjoyed the description of the marble game.  The idea that the boys would scramble and push food off the table for marbles was wonderful.  Great job!

Author's Response: Yes... background. Ben sure has lots of background. Lots of it.



Chapter 2: Good Samaritan

"I loved you then, and whatever sin it is, I love you still!" Hermione Granger never imagined that her wildest fantasy of being with James Potter could some true. But while for Hermione it had just been yesterday, for James it had been nineteen years ago. A sweeping tale of how love transcends time, just to prove it can. [James/Hermione]



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 96907; Read Count: 2428; Completed: No

Updated: 08/19/2007; Published: 03/02/2007
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
03/09/2007
I'm quite intrigued by your storyline.  I haven't actually ever read any J/Hr fics, so this is a first for me.  Just a few minor pointers: look over the grammar, there are a few minor errors that can easily be fixed.  You have a few misplaced words and commas, so just be sure to try and read over it and you'll catch it.  There are also a few minor tensing errors that can also be easily fixed.  I'm so excited about your storyline and can't wait to see where this is going.  Fabulous job!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words. :) Yes, I noticed that too when I was rereading the chapters. I'll do my best to be more careful in the future. I'm really grateful you took time out to review. :)




Chapter 5: Chapter 5 --- Over the Moon

A 7th year fic in which Harry, Ron and Hermione search for the remaining Horcruxes and ultimately battle Voldemort. Post HBP; in canon, no slash. H/G R/Hr

Chapter 25 is up, Chapter 26 is with my beta!



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Mystery
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Violence
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 97655; Read Count: 21518; Completed: No

Updated: 08/31/2007; Published: 03/06/2007
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
08/16/2007
A wonderful chapter.  I truly enjoyed it.  The dialogue was brilliant.  I especially loved the part where Aberforth stated that Ron and Hermione needed to snog each other.  Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot, buttamellow! I'm glad you liked it :)



Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Kreacher's Journey
Unsung Hero by MeghanReviews [Tantric Magic]

There are two things to know about Harry Potter. One: He kicks butt. Two: No one cares. Why? Because Daniel Potter is the Boy Who Lived. Book 6 compliant. Takes place in year 7. Partial parody of Twin fics. Pairing: Harry/Hermione Romantic overtones with Luna. Warnings: Violence and Sex in later chapters.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: The Underground (Adults Only)
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: Book Seven Spoilers, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Strong Language, Strong Violence
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 197962; Read Count: 12862; Completed: Yes

Updated: 02/08/2009; Published: 03/17/2007
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
06/14/2007
I'm really being pulled in to your story.  I really enjoy your characterization of Harry due to the changes you have presented him.  He seems to be treated unfairly by his classmates.  His anger was so prevalent through your writing that I could almost feel it.  Wonderful job!


Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
06/14/2007
Another amazing chapter.  I love how Harry is still the hero, but is completely overlooked.  Poor guy. 


Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
06/14/2007
Ooh, wonderful beginning.  Sounds to me like Harry was actually the savior, but his brother is getting all of the credit.  Part of me wonders if it is all intentional on everyone else's part.  I'm probably wrong.  Great first chapter!


Chapter 1: Chapter 1