Penname: Buttamellow [Contact]
Real name: Leslie
Member Since: 08/10/2005
Membership status: Member

Let's see. I'm a 25-year old workaholic who spends her days running a retail store and dealing with interesting customers. I enjoy reading, writing, sleeping and spending time with my friends and family.


My guilty pleasures consist of RPG, fanfiction and romance novels (the non-trashy kind of course!). Oh and Diet Dr. Pepper. I really love a good Diet Dr. Pepper.


"Sunshine, daisies, butter mellow, turn this stupid, fat rat yellow!"



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Gender: female


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A poem about the Elves, perhaps written by Bilbo in Rivendell.



Categories: Lord of the Rings; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Poetry
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 125; Read Count: 530; Completed: Yes

Updated: 03/27/2009; Published: 03/27/2009
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
04/03/2009

I love your word choice throughout the entire poem.  I think I love the part, "Their voices silent, shall not cry/ For lands now lost and days gone by."  Wonderful job!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you read this poem and enjoyed it. I'm actually working on another but I'm sort of stuck on one last rhyming couplet so we'll see. Thanks so much for the review, I really appreciate it! ~Gina :)




Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Edward is well aware of the difficulty in keeping Bella safe. After much consideration, he makes a decision that changes both of their lives tremendously.

 

 



Categories: Twilight; Characters: Edward Cullen; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 630; Read Count: 383; Completed: Yes

Updated: 04/01/2009; Published: 04/01/2009
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
04/19/2009

An interesting start. :)  I really look forward to seeing more.  It's fun seeing the story from Edward's PoV.  Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am glad that you liked it. It's fun being inside Edwrad's head!

~Lacey




Chapter 1: Prologue
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In Breaking Dawn, Edward tells Bella that he talked to Carlisle and his brothers about their wedding night.  Given how mannerly and gentlemanly both Edward and Carlisle are, I've often wondered how the conversation between them went.  This is a stand-alone one shot that will eventually have at least two companion pieces



Categories: Twilight; Characters: Carlisle Cullen, Edward Cullen; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 4983; Read Count: 902; Completed: Yes

Updated: 04/09/2009; Published: 04/09/2009
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
04/19/2009

I really enjoyed reading this.  I think you did a wonderful job describing Edward's angst and I loved the conversation between him and Carlisle.  I look forward to the other parts.  Wonderful job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, and thanks for the recommendation, too!  Now that finals are over, I might be able to work on the next parts of this.  Thanks for reviewing!




Chapter 1: The Talk, Part 1 (One Shot)
Polar Opposites by the_wind [Young Teens]
starstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
One was my sun; the other was my moon. One was hot, the other cold. One was a vampire, the other a werewolf. I had – once upon a time – lived and almost died for one, while the other lived and would die for me. They were polar opposites. How, then, could I still love both? Jacob-imprints-on-Bella fic. Still haven't decided on final pairing.

Categories: Twilight; Characters: Bella Swan, Edward Cullen, Jacob Black; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 4909; Read Count: 978; Completed: No

Updated: 04/11/2009; Published: 04/10/2009
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
04/17/2009

An interesting start. I look forward to seeing where this will go.  :)



Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it.



Chapter 1: Prologue - One Slight Alteration

Takes place during Breaking Dawn.  Esme and Carlisle race home when they receive word of what has happened to Bella.  Unsure of what to expect, they find a most surprising gift waiting for them.



Categories: Twilight; Characters: Bella Cullen, Carlisle Cullen, Edward Cullen, Esme Cullen, Renesmee Cullen; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1138; Read Count: 836; Completed: Yes

Updated: 05/09/2009; Published: 05/09/2009
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
05/14/2009

Beautiful story. I do hope you plan to continue.  I look forward to reading more!



Author's Response:

This is actually a one shot, but I do have other stories from other character's POV that I will be posting. Thanks for reading and reviewing!




Chapter 1: Chapter 1
For My Own by Strider [All Ages]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]

Everyone knows Carlisle's never slipped...right?  But whatever else Carlisle is, he is a vampire, with all the instincts and temptations that entails.  What happens when Carlisle has to truly face his own nature?  Is he fighting a battle he might not win?



Categories: Twilight; Characters: Carlisle Cullen, Charles Evanson, Edward Cullen, Esme Platt nee Evanson; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: None
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 19506; Read Count: 2432; Completed: Yes

Updated: 06/01/2009; Published: 05/20/2009
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
05/20/2009

I am glad to see that this is not completed.  I do look forward to your next chapter.  I love how you captured my attention right from the beginning.  You did a wonderful job.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I really love Carlisle, and I like to see him struggle with his dark side, so I'm glad you enjoyed it, too.  It's not a very long story, but I hope you'll like it.




Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
05/23/2009

I'm so glad to see you continued this.  I still love your view of Carlisle.  His sense of honor and self-deprication are very well written.  Love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  It still has a few chapters to go, so I hope you continue to like it.  I appreciate your reviews!




Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
05/30/2009

Another amazing chapter.  I thought you did a wonderful job showing the difference between Carlilse and Charles, and how Charles was truly the monster of the pair of them.  Great job.  I look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad that came through.  I really appreciate you always reading and reviewing!




Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
06/01/2009

Absolutely breathtaking.  You did a wonderful job wrapping up the story at the end.  I'm glad to see that Carlilse came to terms with his guilt.  Great job!  I truly enjoyed reading this fic from front to back.  Thank you so much for sharing it with us.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I really appreciate yu reading and reviewing every chapter, and I'm thrilled that you liked the story so much.  It's hard not to love Carlisle!  Thanks again!




Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Home Again by Gmariam [All Ages]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]

Written for the One-Hour Challenge, this short story follows Samwise Gamgee as he says farewell to Frodo at the Grey Havens.



Categories: Lord of the Rings; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: One-Hour Challenge
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1458; Read Count: 812; Completed: Yes

Updated: 06/23/2009; Published: 06/23/2009
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
07/26/2009

This was beautifully written.  I especialy loved when Merry and Pippin arrived as it seemed to capture them so well.  Congrats on winning the challenge.  Your fic was very well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! Just so you know, I did take Merry and Pippin's entrance right from the last chapter - but I'm glad you liked it, I'll let the Professor know. ;) Thank you for reading this story, and for the congrats on the challenge! I enjoyed entering it! ~Gina :)




Chapter 1: Home Again