Penname: Buttamellow [Contact]
Real name: Leslie
Member Since: 08/10/2005
Membership status: Member

Let's see. I'm a 25-year old workaholic who spends her days running a retail store and dealing with interesting customers. I enjoy reading, writing, sleeping and spending time with my friends and family.


My guilty pleasures consist of RPG, fanfiction and romance novels (the non-trashy kind of course!). Oh and Diet Dr. Pepper. I really love a good Diet Dr. Pepper.


"Sunshine, daisies, butter mellow, turn this stupid, fat rat yellow!"



Beta-reader: Yes
Gender: female


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Reviews by Buttamellow

Holy Horcruxes, Harry! All of your BOOK SEVEN questions answered before July 21st! The killing curse leaves no mark, so why does Harry have one?  Why did it take Hagrid twenty-four hours to get Harry to the Dursleys’?  Our hero's phenomenal adventures continue, and he will not emerge unscathed. Who will survive?  Will Harry find the Horcruxes and defeat Voldemort?  And whose side are Snape and Draco Malfoy really on?  Please review!  COMPLETED 6/27/2007!!!



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 107026; Read Count: 42694; Completed: Yes

Updated: 06/30/2007; Published: 05/24/2007
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
05/30/2007
Another wonderful chapter.  You definitely didn't disappoint.  Poor Harry is torn between Ginny and Luci.  I enjoyed the sequence at Number Four, particularly the portion where Dudley describes his dreams.  I can't wait to see how you bring it in to explain why Petunia was messing aroudn with a wand.  I also look forward to the revelation as to what the other two envelopes hold and why Harry wasn't returned until November 2nd.  Great job!

Author's Response: You know, I always look forward to your reviews!  Well, all of these revelations are towards the end, but they will come!  *Sunny*



Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen - TwentyFour Hours Missing
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
05/29/2007
I really enjoyed this chapter.  There may not have been as much action in it, but it still kept up the pace with the last one.  Mrs. Weasley's actions were priceless.  I'm also becoming more intrigued by Luci.  I'm guessing that she healed quickly and thus doesn't want to show Harry and the Order.  The idea that the letter might still be at the Dursley's house seems different- I would have expected them to have thrown it away, or something along those lines- and I look forward to your explanations in the next chapter.  Great job!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, and I really appreciate your reviews, as yours are the only ones I've gotten for the most part.  You are right about Luci, and I hope I don't disappoint regarding the letter!  It's a long chapter ahead!  Enjoy!  Cheers!  *Sunny*



Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen - Spilled Butterbeer
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
05/29/2007
Another great chapter.  Poor Hermione!  Her hair destroyed.  This chapter was very well written.  The emotions and actions at the beginning giving an overall sense of remorse.  The description of the Chamber and the revelation that the ring was indeed Gryffindor's instead of Slytherin's was great too. 

Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  Some details are easier than others, and I always seem to have a smooth time with remorse, haha!



Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen - The Mouth of Slytherin
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
05/25/2007

Another great chapter.  I particularly liked:

“You didn’t survive in the first place to die in the end.” 

This seems so real to me.  I can't see how Harry could live through so many obstacles only to die in the end.  I want to believe in him living.  I look forward to the next installment!



Author's Response: I totally agree with you!  Harry's live has been miserable, and I just can't see all of that misery ending in death.  The boy deserves a happy ending, and I hope Jo agrees with me!  Thanks SO much for your kind reviews - I keep looking forward to them!  Cheers!  *Sunny*



Chapter 5: Chapter Five - Godric's Hollow
It's My Will by Cheryl78 [Mid Teens]
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When a great battle comes to an end, you see who your true friends are. When you're dying there's no time for regret, truth is all you have left and there's no point in being mean with the people around you. Severus Snape experiences all this in the last day of his life.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Songfic
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Character Death, Strong Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1757; Read Count: 492; Completed: Yes

Updated: 06/11/2007; Published: 06/11/2007
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
06/11/2007
An amazing songfic.  You weaved the lyrics beautifully into the story content.  Wonderful job!


Chapter 1: It's My Will

Malfoy and the gang of (mostly) Gryffindors have a drunken discussion about Muggles, and why Malfoy doesn't like them.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Alcohol and/or Drug Abuse, Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: Fizzing Whizbees
Word count: 335; Read Count: 523; Completed: Yes

Updated: 06/22/2007; Published: 06/22/2007
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
08/30/2007
*laughs*  This was cute.  I love how Draco thanks Luna.  Great job!


Chapter 1: Firewhisky and Frumious Gripples
Through no fault of his own, Harry becomes a vampire. Which struggle will prove the hardest? The fight to find the Horcruxes against Voldemort and his minions, or the fight to hold onto his own failing humanity? This story picks up after the events of the Half-Blood Prince and makes an immediate detour into the Twilight Zone.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Dark Fiction, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 117407; Read Count: 6148; Completed: Yes

Updated: 09/16/2007; Published: 06/29/2007
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
08/16/2007
I'm quite intrigued by your story.  It is very unique and I love the fact that Hermione and Harry are vampires and are working together.  Wonderful job!  Keep up the great work!


Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
08/27/2007
Another amazing chapter!  I especially loved the scene with Dobby.  It was so sad.  Great job!  I look forward to seeing where this goes next.


Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
08/29/2007
Another great chapter.  An interesting way for Snape's demise.  I look forward to the next chapter!


Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
08/29/2007
I loved the scene where Ginny relays to Molly what happened in St. Mungo's.  Great chapter, yet again.  :)


Chapter 16: Chapter 16