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Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
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Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: Dianne (Signed)
06/27/2005
Another awesome chapter! I was just waiting for Harry to have some sort of horrible flashback of Vernon hitting him or something when Ginny hit him. She would have felt awful! I can't help but wonder if Snape doesn't have something lined up for this detention too. I hope that Harry and Ginny play Quidditch together in this story. It would be so interesting! Very nicely done! I will read more when you post!

Author's Response: Wow! I feel on top of the world. Your kind words have shaken the cobwebs out of my head and now inspiration strikes for my 6th chapter. Thank you for reviewing, I really appreciate.



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Harry is hit by a spell during a fight at The Burrow and vanishes from the known Wizarding world. Waking up in a world and time not his own, he comes face to face with the greatest wizard ever known.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents Series: The Hallowquest Saga
Word count: 24018; Read Count: 13466; Completed: No

Updated: 06/13/2007; Published: 05/04/2005
Reviewer: Dianne (Signed)
06/27/2005
oooh, creepy! Very well written! As far as I could see, flawless grammar and spelling as well...I envy you! I, like everyone else who is reading this story, probably think they know who the Death Eater standing in the graveyard is, so I'm going to read the next chapter to find out if I'm right even though it is hideously late here....I can't stop reading this! Your chapter is a nice size and contains a lot of excitement and information for the set up. Great job!

Author's Response: The spy will be seen from time to time, but if I do my job right (and the spy does theirs) then their identity will be unknown for quite some time. Don't worry though, they will be making another appearance. Or two. Or three. Well, you get the idea.



Chapter 1: Prologue
Reviewer: Dianne (Signed)
06/27/2005
Now that was cool! I have a pocket watch in my story as well, but just as an object...I absolutely love what you have done with it! The way you fit the mudane chorse Harry has to do with the anticipation of what is about to happen, is masterful. I was just sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for him to vanish at the store or something in front of Muggles or something. You must update soon! Cliffies are evil! I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I thought about having him dissappear on the street just as he gets to the house. But decided that it would give a better effect for him to be talking to his aunt when it happens.



Chapter 2: Chapter 01

Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley are married, and have a family of their own. It is 6 years since Voldemort was defeated; he thought that the most horrible experience of his life was over. He was wrong. His life takes an unpleasant turn when a deatheaters plot revenge. I have tweaked my original story hopefully for the better and I have added an epilouge! I hope you like it. This is the second story in my Love and Family Series. But was written first.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction, Post-Canon
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Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 22340; Read Count: 1713; Completed: No

Updated: 06/22/2005; Published: 06/05/2005
Reviewer: Dianne (Signed)
06/27/2005
wow! the last part was a shocker and has left me wanting to find out what's happened! You have grabbed me for sure and I will continue reading. I loved how Harry had to be the one to emphasize for Ron that Hermione was pregnant. I guess having his own kids already, he would remember his experiences with Ginny when she told him she was pregnant. A very flawless chapter and so very enjoyable...but I must now stop reviewing for this chapter and go on to see the next! a ten for sure!


Chapter 1: Victim
Reviewer: Dianne (Signed)
06/27/2005
Wow! this is the first story of this type that I have read, so it is very different for me. I'm glad you mentioned in the last part of the story that Harry is now worried for his children. I hope he places really strong wards around their bedroom. It is nice to see Percy and Penelope in this story. I have never read a post Hogwarts story before. You have captured the reality of what Harry's life would probably be like even after the fall of Voldemort very well, while most authors are content to make that time all sunshine and roses. This is realistic as there will obviously be people very perturbed to say the least by Harry's victory, and they will have learned very early on, that the best way to get to Harry, is through Ginny, and to me, the way they left her, she will feel as though she is better off dead. A very serious story for sure.


Chapter 2: The Crime Revealed
Reviewer: Dianne (Signed)
06/27/2005
It's hard to review a story like this to be honest, because 'great job' doesn't seem to fit with the serious tone of it...though you have done a great job. I will read few chapters at a time because I am not used to this kind of story. I know I will enjoy reading a part where the people responsible for this horrible crime are caught and I hope they are brought to justice. Harry and Ginny seem to be a strong pair in this story, and I hope they can heal. Again, a very realistic story!


Chapter 3: Family Love
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Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: Dianne (Signed)
07/08/2005
Wow! You give so much attention to detail, even mentioning the logo on the Grunnings paper. That is awesome! I have wanted to review for quite some time, but time allows only so much for reading. I am so glad I chose this story to read! It has drawn me in right away. This is quite close to canon and I'm impressed by that. It's like poor Harry is only going through the motions of living and the glimpse into headquarters makes me feel sorry for Remus as well, so helpless and resigned that Harry must stay at the Dursleys. I can't wait to read more. Ten out of ten for sure!

Author's Response: Hi, Dianne! I'm glad you made it over here, and I hope you continue to enjoy! :) Please don't be afraid to tell me if you find problems, though. But I do hope you like it as much when are you are the end as you do right now, at the beginning.



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Reviewer: Dianne (Signed)
07/08/2005
OMG! poor Harry! I hope Mrs Weasley has a charm that will magically make the letter spill the truth..'I'm fine...no I'm not' sort of thing. Molly needs a spell like that with so many children. I love this chapter. It's so sad and heart felt. Not many writers can make me get teary eyed, but you have. Also, I must compliment your polished chapters. You have really done a professional job on this. It's so late here, but I must read a bit more before I go to bed...even though I have to be up early! Great job!

Author's Response: I am so glad you are liking it, Dianne...:) That means a lot to me. I hope you will continue to enjoy it - I look forward to hearing what you think.



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Reviewer: Dianne (Signed)
07/08/2005
okay...this review will be short...that's what happens when you write a fabulous story like this and the reader can't wait to get to the next part! Poor Harry!

Author's Response: Yep - Harry's in a fair amount of trouble at this point, you're right about that. I'm glad you're still liking it!



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Reviewer: Dianne (Signed)
07/08/2005
oh, you are awesome! I could almost feel a lump in my throat when Remus carried Harry in! Honestly, I want to review each chapter, but I need to read more!! It's almost five in the morning! Evil author! another ten for sure!

Author's Response: Tell you what - you don't have to review each chapter...just read and enjoy. I didn't write this for the reviews, even though I *do* love them.



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