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Real name: Andy Boal
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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
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Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No

Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: AndyB (Signed)
A good start, with the story nicely set. I liked the interweaving of the Toni Braxton song... Only thing I'd change at this stage is just formatting, italicising the lyrics.