Real name: Good Nate
Member Since: 12/15/2006
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Harry decides enough is enough when the Order once again keeps him isolated after Dumbledore's death. He escapes Privet Drive and goes out into the world by himself to search for a way to defeat Voldemort and his Horcruxes, and to find a reason for doing it. Spoilers of HBP and all previous books.
1500 words into 10.
Agreed... The vibe I was going for is that he is trying to convince himself that he owes them a life debt after she found him, so he stays. The real reason, of course, is that he got-s the hot-s for Kaycee. (S'cuse the language)
I've withheld any description of her, besides her blond hair and a few other things, because I am saving that for a much more interesting way of revealing what (in my mind) she looks like.
And I'm glad you got hooked. That shows at least a bit of competence on my part ;)
Next chapter will be up soon, hopefully.