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Passing the Torch by Cyborg [Mid Teens]
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Harry decides enough is enough when the Order once again keeps him isolated after Dumbledore's death. He escapes Privet Drive and goes out into the world by himself to search for a way to defeat Voldemort and his Horcruxes, and to find a reason for doing it. Spoilers of HBP and all previous books.

1500 words into 10. 

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 52336; Read Count: 9842; Completed: No

Updated: 03/19/2008; Published: 08/26/2006
Reviewer: Good Nate (Signed)
WOOT! I just read all the chapters nate.  I must say that I was pleasantly suprised.  Bravo indeed.  The whole Kaycee stuff is a bit of a departure from Potter norm, but i'm getting used to it.  One thing that rings just a little false to me is how Harry seems to have completely forgotten about the "mission" that he was so adamant about embarking on when he left the Dursleys.  But maybe he's just so blown away by the genuine goodness that Kaycee's familly is showing him that he doesn't want to leave to complete his mission.  Anyway, great job so far!  I planned on just reading chapter 1 tonight, but I got hooked.  Keep it up.

Author's Response:

Agreed... The vibe I was going for is that he is trying to convince himself that he owes them a life debt after she found him, so he stays. The real reason, of course, is that he got-s the hot-s for Kaycee. (S'cuse the language)

I've withheld any description of her, besides her blond hair and a few other things, because I am saving that for a much more interesting way of revealing what (in my mind) she looks like. 

And I'm glad you got hooked. That shows at least a bit of competence on my part ;)

Next chapter will be up soon, hopefully.

 -Bad Nate

Chapter 4: Playing Army