Reviews by Hot48cricket
Wooed by the Law by Lily Evans [Adult]
The International Confederation of Wizards has reinstated the Marriage Law. Hermione and Ron broke up a month beforehand, but could they still harbor feelings for each other, even when Hermione must marry Bill and Ron must marry Luna? Can they fall in love with their intended spouses? In response to the famous Ashwinder challenge, though tweaked a bit.
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book Seven Spoilers, Sexual Situations, Strong Language
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 4712; Read Count: 323; Completed: No
Updated: 09/02/2007; Published: 08/11/2007
Reviewer: Hot48cricket (Signed)
08/14/2007
If 5 yrs have passed since Voldemort was defeated, why does Hermione say it's been 6 months?
So Bill did not marry Fleur??
It will be a blast to see Ron married to Luna! (Poor Neville!)
Why did Hermione apparate to the street and not into the atrium at the ministry??
Author's Response: OMG I totally didn't paste the latest version of the chapter *headdesk* Do not worry, it will be fixed. And yes, what happened to Fleur will be explained later on. And Hermione Apparated to the street and not into the Atrium because I thought you weren't allowed to. I guess I'll keep it like that for now but reference it in later chapters. Thanks for the constructive review, that really helped!
Chapter 1: A Trip Back to Misery
Warning--Health Hazards Ahead by hgseeker [Mid Teens]
Harry happens to overhear Hermione and Ginny giggling over a catalog featuring Halloween costumes. He gathers that they intend to choose the sexiest possible outfits they can get away with in order to ambush him and Ron. He tells Ron and the boys start hatching their own plot for revenge. (Sixth-year fic.)
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Mild Language, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 9746; Read Count: 853; Completed: Yes
Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Mild Language, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 9746; Read Count: 853; Completed: Yes
Updated: 10/08/2007; Published: 10/08/2007
Reviewer: Hot48cricket (Signed)
10/11/2007
Pretty good story. Should be considered AU since you reference Jack Sparrow from Pirates of the Caribbean which chame out in 2003...Harry wouldhave graduated in 1998.
Chapter 1: Warning--Health Hazards Ahead