Penname: phoenixphire [Contact]
Real name: Patricia
Member Since: 10/25/2006
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Shadow of the Serpent by KEDme [Young Teens]
starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 32]
The sequel to Home Alone. Harry is whisked away to an ancient island to be trained in Occlumency. What he finds is another complication to add to his already complicated life. Will friendship, love, loyalty, bravery, and honor be enough to save him from the Shadow of the Serpent that haunts his life? H/G, with some R/H in later chapters.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 220899; Read Count: 38792; Completed: Yes

Updated: 03/08/2007; Published: 01/22/2006
Reviewer: phoenixphire (Signed)
12/08/2006

WOW. honestly one of the best stories i've read here on wizardtales, right up there with cts' Reign O'er Me, my all-time favorite. your characters take on a depth in your writing that just draws me in. the plot is fast-paced, yet with enough fluff to carry it along. the mixtec prophecy idea is unique and i loved how you described the island! i am a huge H/G shipper and your soul bond idea is a dream come true. i would've liked to see a bigger role for ginny, maybe some new "powers" developing, rather than just as leverage to get to harry.

So keep up the awesome work!! i can't wait to see how this ends.




Chapter 30: Rescue
How He Knew by A House Elf [All Ages]
half-star [Reviews - 5]
Lily makes a slip of the tongue that causes James to wonder.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1975; Read Count: 818; Completed: Yes

Updated: 04/07/2007; Published: 04/07/2007
Reviewer: phoenixphire (Signed)
05/18/2008
a cute scene, very good job capturing emotions; i love the vivid detail and personality that shows thru here


Chapter 1: An Encounter Between James and Lily