Real name: Mike
Member Since: 08/07/2005
Membership status: Member
I'm VERY happy to see that you are still writing.
I'm most interested to see if that comment about James turns into anything!
What if the fates that let Harry's parents live the night he got his scar, also gave him a younger sister and let him befriend Ron Weasley earlier? What would be different?
Post OotP. Harry must deal with the loss of his Godfather, Hogwarts gets a new Defense Professor with more than a few secrets, and Voldemort watches from the shadows, awaiting a moment to strike. Just a typical year for the Boy-Who-Lived, really...
Three months have passed since the last time Harry Potter was seen. This is the story of a young man trying to find his way home.
**Slightly rewritten, beta-ed, and cut into small chapters for easier reading**
I liked that you started with Snape and Draco and I am interested to see what you do with them and the Order.
A couple of issues.
1. You mention that Snape uses Occumenlcy (sp?) on Draco, but it should be Legilmens (yeah, sp?)
2. I'm sure that it's changed since I was given grammar lessons, but I, personally, cringed with the number of times that sentences started with And or Because....
I'll look forward to seeing more of this story!