Penname: Desslok [Contact]
Real name: Jim Ghilloni
Member Since: 08/06/2005
Membership status: Member

I am a 36yo man, married, with 2 daughters (7 and 5).

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Reviews by Desslok
Here's a series of unrelated holiday fluff since Christmas is right around the bend...

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff, General
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2260; Read Count: 1030; Completed: No

Updated: 11/15/2005; Published: 11/13/2005
Reviewer: Desslok (Signed)
11/14/2005
A very nice little slice of holiday fluff. :) You write well, esp. since it is tough to do a character properly in the first person. Nice job!


Chapter 1: Thank you Santa
Her Perfume by mrsHarryPotter12 [Young Teens]
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On New Years Eve a red-haired woman escapes the clutches of the evil Ms. Pumpernickel. She flees to the ball, her identity veiled, to dance with her raven haired prince. The stroke of midnight leaves many questions, and a kiss.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 3837; Read Count: 1459; Completed: No

Updated: 11/14/2005; Published: 11/13/2005
Reviewer: Desslok (Signed)
11/14/2005
Ok, so now we get chapter 2 in which we find out that he knew it was her the whole time and has loved her forever and get to the big happy ending, right??? :) Very well done.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!



Chapter 1: The Ball
Welcome to the Twelve Step Program! Not only will you learn to be a better boyfriend but also how to: defeat evil warlords, attract tramps, avoid death in spite of 2,000,000,000 to 1 odds, and hook up your best friends. Good luck!

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fluff
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2694; Read Count: 427; Completed: No

Updated: 11/14/2005; Published: 11/14/2005
Reviewer: Desslok (Signed)
11/14/2005
Great start! Very funny story. The bit with the Silencio and the ----- is quite inspired. I really look forward to the next chapter!


Chapter 1: Bacon?, Weddings, and - - - - -
ONESHOT HG It must have been the mistletoe. The lazy fire, the falling snow. The magic in the frosty air. That we would fall in love! Ginny has Harry to herself this Christmas holidays at Hogwarts, she plans to make the most of it. Wtih a little help from the WWW's Enchanted Mistletoe...

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Alternate Universe
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 6258; Read Count: 526; Completed: No

Updated: 11/16/2005; Published: 11/16/2005
Reviewer: Desslok (Signed)
11/17/2005
Very sweet story, though I kinda wish you hadn't rushed through the end so quickly.... of course, that's pretty selfish of me, since you're the one doing all the writing! :) Wonderful tale. I can't wait to read more of your work!


Chapter 1: It Must Have Been the Mistletoe
Empathy by drabbleocity [Young Teens]
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Cedric Diggory was in love with Harry Potter, and the whole world knew it but them.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst, Fluff
Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 685; Read Count: 401; Completed: Yes

Updated: 11/30/2005; Published: 11/30/2005
Reviewer: Desslok (Signed)
12/01/2005
Really nice job. It never occured to me, but still seems plausible as you've presented it. Well done!


Chapter 1: Empathy