Penname: Jayiin [Contact]
Real name: alan m
Member Since: 09/23/2006
Membership status: Administrator

I sometimes think of myself as an internet mystic, exploring the ineffable qualities of the internet and trying to become one with it (aka -- no social life). But I spend too much time in my own mind; I get bored, and decide to share what I found there.



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Harry's spending one week at the Burrow before he goes a-Horcrux hunting. The inhabitants of the Burrow are determined to make sure he doesn't leave without setting things right with Ginny. Problem is - they only have seven days to convince a stubborn Ginny and a pig-headed Harry that they're meant for each other.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 6375; Read Count: 826; Completed: Yes

Updated: 03/15/2006; Published: 03/15/2006
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
02/06/2009

Amazing story!

I like your different perspective on it.  Harry was doing what he thought was right, but Ginny was doing what she knew was wrong.

Interesting take and a fascinating bit of work.  My favorite scene was definitely Bill, followed by Hermione.  I don't know if I can count Fred & George among the rest of them, because they took action.

Arthur was amazing, and so was Ron!

Fantastic read.




Chapter 1: Chapter 1
With the magical world intertwined with their own, muggles are bound to see something strange every now and then. This one-shot follows an ordinary Muggle at an ordinary train station on a not-so-ordinary day.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Humor
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2368; Read Count: 392; Completed: No

Updated: 04/07/2006; Published: 04/07/2006
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
02/04/2009

*ROTFLMAO*  That was bloody brilliant!  Poor George, getting his butt kicked - though that was such a Weasley twin thing to do.

Brilliant ending!




Chapter 1: One Shot
Indeed by Ashlyn Alexander [All Ages]
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A short drabble showing just how annoying older brothers can be.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 285; Read Count: 466; Completed: Yes

Updated: 04/08/2006; Published: 04/07/2006
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
02/06/2009

Indeed!

Leave it to the twins to make a simple word into a wonderful joke!  Well done!




Chapter 1: Indeed
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During Occlumency lessons in the course of Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, Professor Snape notices something... off in Harry's memories. Non-Slash.


Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU)
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 57331; Read Count: 28185; Completed: No

Updated: 01/27/2011; Published: 04/12/2006
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
02/23/2011
Oh, how I wanted to see Umbridge taken to task during OotP. And after.

Snape's use of the Weasley twins was fantastic - but I wish, if your version of Snape really does care - he would start showing some kind of equality.

Alas, I can understand why he couldn't with Voldemort around...but I can wish.



Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Animadverto
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
02/23/2011
Interesting and well-written.

Even with the Unbreakable Vow between Severus and Lily, I have a hard time with the character of Severus Snape.

He is not a good person; he spent years tormenting, mocking and emotionally abusing students. If any child in my care had a teacher like him, I would have done everything in my power to get that person removed as a teacher.

So, in the respect of Snape's motivations, this feels very alien to me, but you write it well. I like how you use 'Weasley' and 'Granger' when Snape is talking to Ron and Hermione. I like the what you had Ron say at the end of the chapter.

And I'm curious as to how Dumbledore - if he really did keep as much an eye on Harry as he says he did at the end of the 5th book - could have missed the signs you describe.

Still - very interesting take on things and I'm heading to the next chapter.



Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Orsa
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
02/23/2011
Not much more to add except - good chapter and I like Harry's idea for a trap.

Good story.



Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Veritas et Deceptio
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
02/23/2011
Go Harry!

And...alas...Umbitch. I like that Snape reinforced his shields. Poor Voldy is going to have to work very hard to get at Harry this time.

I just hope that somehow, Umbridge gets taken down and taken out so Dumbledore can come back.

But how are you going to have Voldemort revealed to the world?



Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Defessus Vita
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
02/23/2011
This was awesome - and I hope that Snape is on his way to breaking free of Voldemort. The scene where Remus, Sirius and Snape took Dumbledore to task was golden.

I look forward to seeing what happens next.



Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Parvulus
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
02/23/2011
I love the twins and your write them so well. Again, I love the way you write Ron.

Great chapter - honest teachers dealing with problems as best they can and trying to make things better is always good to read.



Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Congressus
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
02/23/2011
You know, one of the best scenes I've ever read in fic was when McGonagall apologized to Harry, Ron and Hermione for not believing them in first year.

This had some of the same feeling to it; well done.

I love the way you're writing Ron; I really do. I hate it when he's made out to be just a buffoon - in this, he's a person and one that cares about his friends.



Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Eventus