Penname: Jayiin [Contact]
Real name: alan m
Member Since: 09/23/2006
Membership status: Administrator

I sometimes think of myself as an internet mystic, exploring the ineffable qualities of the internet and trying to become one with it (aka -- no social life). But I spend too much time in my own mind; I get bored, and decide to share what I found there.



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Post OotP. Harry must deal with the loss of his Godfather, Hogwarts gets a new Defense Professor with more than a few secrets, and Voldemort watches from the shadows, awaiting a moment to strike. Just a typical year for the Boy-Who-Lived, really...



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, General
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 158163; Read Count: 102531; Completed: No

Updated: 07/18/2009; Published: 01/14/2006
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
03/13/2007
Poor Harry.  Ginny's got him tied in knots.


Chapter 7: Defence Against the Dark Arts
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
03/13/2007
I remember reading this the first time and loving it.  This was one of your better chapters; I love the interplay between Harry and Sirius.


Chapter 8: The Dream Plane
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
03/13/2007
ahh, the introduction of my favorite of your characters.


Chapter 9: The Aftermath
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
03/13/2007
Not much to say on this one, except good work.


Chapter 10: Hogsmeade
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
03/13/2007
I like that you made the Basilisk the familiar spirit.  And Hermione's line about being a flunky still amuses me.


Chapter 11: A Gryffindor Thing
Hermione realizes who she's loved all along. One-Shot

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Alternate Universe
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2370; Read Count: 469; Completed: Yes

Updated: 01/22/2006; Published: 01/22/2006
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
01/24/2009

Neatly done!  I like the way you wrote the dynamic between the two, and the way Harry reveals his feelings for her.

I'd like to maybe see a follow-up on this, see what happens next.




Chapter 1: It's Always Been There

Takes place immediately (IMMEDIATELY) after Book 5. What happens if Mad Eye's warning at King's Cross Station has just the exact opposite effect than intended? When things take an immediate turn for the worse, will Harry be able to survive?

UPDATE: Many surprises are revealed, and an emotional day is had by all.



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Strong Language, Strong Violence
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 54484; Read Count: 4878; Completed: No

Updated: 03/20/2007; Published: 03/01/2006
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
01/21/2009

Dark beginning, but very well written.  I look forward to reading the rest - especially how Harry gets out of the situation you've put him in.




Chapter 1: Imprisonment
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
01/21/2009

Wow.  Vernon is turning into quite the villain; I can't wait to see how you get Harry out of this!




Chapter 2: Bending
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
01/21/2009

Oh damn.

Harry's broken, Hedwig's dead, and even Voldemort has noticed what's going on.

This is a good story...very dark, but good.




Chapter 3: Broken
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
01/21/2009

Evil cliffy is evil.

Talk about a moment - she didn't even recognize him!




Chapter 4: Letters for Harry