Penname: Jayiin [Contact]
Real name: alan m
Member Since: 09/23/2006
Membership status: Administrator

I sometimes think of myself as an internet mystic, exploring the ineffable qualities of the internet and trying to become one with it (aka -- no social life). But I spend too much time in my own mind; I get bored, and decide to share what I found there.



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This is the story of a war. A war between good and evil, light and dark. This is the war Harry will fight, fight until the last breath leaves his body. This is where he will learn the meanings of life and death, love and friendship, sorrow and betrayal, honour and hardship. This is the war where he will fulfil his destiny.
H/G with some R/H sixth year fic.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: Mild Violence
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 158162; Read Count: 23816; Completed: No

Updated: 03/13/2011; Published: 02/18/2005
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
03/22/2009

I saw this story come up on our 'newest' section and I thought I'd give it a read!  So far, I like what I've read.  Your description of Harry at the beginning was excellent as was the letter from Gringotts!

 




Chapter 1: Home isn't always where the heart lies.
Rumors by Creative Quill [Mid Teens]
starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
One Shot -- Because rumors are so seldom true, and the best friendships are platonic.

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Humor
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: General
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1807; Read Count: 652; Completed: Yes

Updated: 08/15/2005; Published: 08/15/2005
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
01/24/2009

*LOL*

That's awesome - poor Harry and Hermione.  Great way to resolve things, though!  I would have loved to see Hannah telling off Harry.

H/G for the win!




Chapter 1: One Shot
When Harry's 17th brithday comes around, Ginny is sure she had found the perfect gift. Only, she chickens out and can't give it to him. That night as she sits up, Harry comes down the steps and joins her on the couch. What excatly is the present Ginny got him and why...does Ginny's nervous habit of biting her lip annoy Harry so much?

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: Birthday Bash (CLOSED)
Classification: Drabble
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Mild Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2530; Read Count: 473; Completed: No

Updated: 08/17/2005; Published: 08/17/2005
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
05/23/2007

Fluff!  Just what I needed first thing in the morning to make me smile and enjoy my vacation.

 

Well written and well done. 




Chapter 1: A Reason to Bite Your Lip
Breathe by Greta_Prewett [Mid Teens]
starstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
What happens when Harry Potter gets angry? This time it's not about Voldemort, but Ginny Weasley....

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1703; Read Count: 714; Completed: Yes

Updated: 08/20/2005; Published: 08/20/2005
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
01/15/2009

This was awesome; a great microcosmic look at H/G - I enjoyed the way you described what Harry was feeling and how Ginny reacted to what he did.




Chapter 1: Breathe

What secrets does Petunia Dursley have, and what will Dumbledore do when Harry turns seventeen, and he can no longer be told that he must stay in the Dursley household? And where do his feelings for Ginny fit in?



Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Alternate Universe (AU), General Fan Fiction
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Violence, Sexual Situations
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 36487; Read Count: 5875; Completed: Yes

Updated: 08/22/2005; Published: 08/22/2005
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
01/31/2009

interesting beginnings; I don't usually read stand-alone post OotP 7th-year fics, but your summary caught my eye.  I'm interested to see where you take this 'Lud' thing.




Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Aunt Petunia's Secret
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
01/31/2009

It sure seems like everyone is getting near the breaking point!  I hope you manage to keep up the good work in future chapters, as this was very good.

I'd like to know more about 6h year, but - so far, you've kept a smooth, even pace and not dropped hints as to what happened during that missing year.




Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Month
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
01/31/2009

Interesting that it was Hagrid who gave him the bike.  How did he get to Little Whinging and how did he do so without attracting the Order's notice?

Still - good chapter.  Great scene with leaving the Dursleys, especially Harry's comments to Petunia.  I hope you follow up on the Lud thing with Petunia.




Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Best Birthday
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
01/31/2009

Talk about arrogant!  Dumbledore just doens't get it, does he?

I loved the scene with Molly and the bike!  That was awesome!




Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Burrow
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
01/31/2009

*LOL* Nice house!  My favorite part was when Molly agreed to stay - Petunia doesn't know what's coming!




Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Return to Godric's Hollow
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
01/31/2009

I almost - almost - feel sorry for Petunia.  I feel most sorry for Harry, who's stuck between them all, trying to find a way free.

Nice work.




Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Aunt Petunia