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A dude in college that likes to write.
I've got 2 stories going, in two completely different styles. One is something of a medium scale epic (or its going to be) and the other involves a single main character (currently) trying to discover his past.
Check them both out and review!
Not bad. I would highly suggest an actual prologue on how Sirius found Harry, and what exactly happened ten years before. It would drop the reader into the story at the beginning instead of dropping them in halfway through.
Also, avoid author's notes inside the body of the story.
This was great! I am always interested in "what if" stories, like, "What if Harry was actually happy during his childhood?"
Post OotP. Harry must deal with the loss of his Godfather, Hogwarts gets a new Defense Professor with more than a few secrets, and Voldemort watches from the shadows, awaiting a moment to strike. Just a typical year for the Boy-Who-Lived, really...
Three months have passed since the last time Harry Potter was seen. This is the story of a young man trying to find his way home.
**Slightly rewritten, beta-ed, and cut into small chapters for easier reading**
I could make Hermione's acceptance of Harry's disappearance/death, but the focus isn't really on her making a mistake. It may be a little OOC for her, but I honestly didn't touch much on her reactions at the end. It's mainly about Harry and Ginny. Thanks for the feedback though. Maybe someday I'll write the sequel I've always plotted. Another update next week sometime.
Your story is something of an enigma to me. A riddle if you will. It unlinear, spontaneous, and is worthy of a cult following. Yet the story is captivating and powerful, especially in this last chapter. Does Dumbledore realize that Harry is Mr. Black? The world may never know.
I love your work. Keep it up!
