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Poor Remus. I enjoyed this fic though it made me sad. I felt you expressed his self-doubt and eventual reconciliation with those same doubts well.
The last section stylistically shifts back and forth between 2nd person and limited 3rd person voice. I am not sure if this was intentional, if you meant for it to be 2nd person like the rest of the fic, or meant for it to be all limited 3rd person to differentiate between Remus alive and Remus dead. Be that as it may, it seemed a bit awkward to me.
Nevertheless, I enjoyed the fic immensely and hope to read something else from you again.