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Remus Lupin looks back on the most important part of his life, as his own life ends. MAJOR DH SPOILERS!!

Categories: Harry Potter; Characters: None; Archive Challenge: None
Classification: Romance
Crossover Classes: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Book Seven Spoilers
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 3258; Read Count: 814; Completed: Yes

Updated: 08/14/2007; Published: 08/13/2007
Reviewer: stardawg (Signed)

Poor Remus.  I enjoyed this fic though it made me sad.   I felt you expressed his self-doubt and eventual reconciliation with those same doubts well.

The last section stylistically shifts back and forth between 2nd person and limited 3rd person voice.  I am not sure if this was intentional, if you meant for it to be 2nd person like the rest of the fic, or meant for it to be all limited 3rd person to differentiate between Remus alive and Remus dead.  Be that as it may, it seemed a bit awkward to me.  

Nevertheless, I enjoyed the fic immensely and hope to read something else from you again. 

Author's Response: oh crap I keep on doing that! GAH! I've been doing that unintentionally ever since I wrote this fic! Thanks for bringing that to my attention, I had meant to have the first part in 2nd person, and the last part in 3rd. I suppose I messed that up...I'll take a look at it tonight and see what I can do to fix it. Thanks again luv!

Chapter 1: A Father's Love